This was a beautiful start to this story! I loved it so much, and I could feel the emotions of the protagonist as she's dealing with being who she is and grieving.
Your description paints a beautiful picture, and you have the perfect amount of showing and telling. I cannot wait until this is updated and I will continue to read it until it's done because I loved this so much! Great job!
Your description paints a beautiful picture, and you have the perfect amount of showing and telling. I cannot wait until this is updated and I will continue to read it until it's done because I loved this so much! Great job!