Blooming Lungs - Comments

  • keigo takami.

    keigo takami. (205)

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    This was so beautiful to read, you have no idea. You started off strong, for me personally. And in little ways, it's great for readers such as myself who are unfamiliar with the fandom you are writing for. It kept me hooked and wanting to read more, which I'm happy I did because this was A++++

    I loved the idea of a record store owner and flower shop owner! Two wholesome things that keep my heart warm and fuzzy lol. I loved the description/narration within this one-shot. I could really feel and connect with Hoseok and Yoongi as I was reading this.

    So I had two favorite sentences/passages in this story that I am still not over:

    But for some reason, Hoseok felt his life had been touched by Yoongi, his serene presence quieted Hoseok's loud mind and the darkness of the record store made his flowers seem all the more dazzling by contrast."

    Literally?? This was so powerful to me and it resonated with me on so many levels. I have felt the way Hoseok has before and it just baffles me that you put it into words.

    "Yoongi's. He wasn't in love with the older nor did he want him as more than a beloved friend. He loved Yoongi the way his flowers loved the earth: he fed off of his tranquility but he didn't feel any ardent desires."

    This was also very beautiful and very powerful to me. It was obviously more sad to me since Yoongi didn't return the feelings Hoseok had. But as I was reading it, it was so well written that it made me forget how sad it was? lol.

    Overall, this was a super great read! Well done! :)
    April 18th, 2019 at 12:07am