Revelations - Comments

Ooh, I love a good murder mystery. Finding and connecting all the pieces into one. I only read a few chapters but so far what I've seen is really interesting. I like the kind of short choppy style of writing, it makes it an easy read which is my favorite kind of work. Very nice, can't wait to read more. :)

okay so wow, i just found this story and i haven't read all the chapters yet but i am HOOKED. you're incredible!!!!

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Okay, so usually, original fictions aren't my cup of tea. Usually, I only read about the first five chapters when I do giveaway comments, but wow, this had me hooked. I read all the chapters! The style of the story is much different than how I compose my own, so I think that's what really captivated me from the get go. And I like how this is a story that's very deep and a little complicated and mysterious, but it was also very easy to follow along with.

You really had me there, though! I think that usually we always believe the main character is innocent because well, she's the main character, but halfway through the story I just wasn't sure about it anymore! The way Nina seems to compose herself while talking about the night of the incident really makes me pity her, and I could really feel the sense of guilt coming off her - guilt for possibly killing her father and for forgetting what had happened that night.

I was grateful Kayla got in touch with Nina, because after hearing they left her, I wouldn't have put it past them to just cut all ties with her altogether. But jeez, the biggest thing was finding out who ACTUALLY killed her dad! I, honestly, didn't even think of Isaac because he just seemed so perfect and concerned with Nina's well being. But now that he's been taken away, I wonder how things are going to work out!

You definitely have a talent to keep readers hooked! Great job on this story and keep up the good work!! And have a rec on me!

First of all, I really like the banner you've used for this story. It's simple but gorgeous. So far, this is a very interesting story. You seem to really have a knack for creepy and eery stories. Ooh, what did her dad do? My curiosity is definitely piqued now. And now Nina apologizing to her dad. The buildup in this story is subtle but it works. It just adds to the creepy vibe of the whole story. I can't really say I blame Nina's mother and sister for thinking she's actually the one who killed her father. That's what I would think in that situation. But now I'm wondering what's happened to make her mother change her mind.

That's as far as I've read for now but this is a very good story!

um wow I'm hooked I need more pls and ty

I really love this story so far! I have so many questions that I know will get answered soon enough.
I am sitting on the edge of my seat ready to read more!

Very eerie yet fascinated piece so far!