Chasing the Missing Paths - Comments

  • aweirdkindofyellow

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    @ Twisted;;Symphony
    Of course. But he's only trying to do the right thing.
    July 2nd, 2018 at 11:03pm
  • Twisted;;Symphony

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    Leave it up to Jack to make it awkward lol
    July 2nd, 2018 at 09:33pm
  • aweirdkindofyellow

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    @ Lovesxchokehold
    I also tried to use the idea of only doing major events for another story I have, but it never really worked out. I let people suggest ideas, and they often weren't just major things. That really needs planning. I'm happy to see it worked well for this one though.
    July 1st, 2018 at 12:55am
  • Lovesxchokehold

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    I think that’s why I really like this story!
    June 30th, 2018 at 09:25pm
  • aweirdkindofyellow

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    @ Lovesxchokehold
    Like, I'll have some major events in my head that could connect the middle to the end, but not the stuff to connect those together. The fillers are the worst. That's why this story is great, only major events!
    June 30th, 2018 at 03:09pm
  • Lovesxchokehold

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    I totally understand that! I’m backwards and like to know how things end when I do write (for myself) but it’s getting the middle to meet with the end that gets me.
    June 30th, 2018 at 06:27am
  • aweirdkindofyellow

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    @ Lovesxchokehold
    It's like you've already read the next part (that I wrote over a week ago). You're completely spot on for one part. That unfortunately means it can't be used for the last last chapter, but I'm still thinking of something. I'm having trouble thinking of something, which is not normal for me. Usually, I base a story on the way I want it to end
    June 29th, 2018 at 10:55pm
  • Lovesxchokehold

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    What if the dog gets sick, she takes her to the vet. Jack is there with his cat (or something) they go for coffee later Alex shows up. She caught James cheating or he had to move to work and boom her and Alex accept fate and get together. I have no idea I suck at writing lol
    June 29th, 2018 at 10:25am
  • aweirdkindofyellow

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    @ Twisted;;Symphony
    The concert idea might be a problem (you'll see why later), but a performance does seem like a good idea. I'll see what I can do with it.
    June 26th, 2018 at 05:29pm
  • Twisted;;Symphony

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    NO OPEN ENDED SCENE!!! And they HAVE to get together in the end!!! Do like.... her being side stage at a concert or her being on this last warped tour with them.... or better yet, him and jack being in the audience at one of her performances or movies or something
    June 26th, 2018 at 10:40am
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    @ aweirdkindofyellow
    WHAT?!
    June 26th, 2018 at 10:34am
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    @ Twisted;;Symphony
    I definitely wouldn't say it's progress. I would say it's the complete opposite.
    June 26th, 2018 at 08:05am
  • Twisted;;Symphony

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    I mean.... progress?? Lol
    June 26th, 2018 at 01:50am
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    @ Twisted;;Symphony
    That's exactly what he should be thinking, right?
    I have the next four chapters written already, so expect another update tomorrow morning!
    June 24th, 2018 at 11:17pm
  • Twisted;;Symphony

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    Ugh Alex *face palm*
    The on and off again girlfriend is not for you! Especially not when you're eager to jet off with Emma at a moments notice! I can't wait for the next update!
    June 24th, 2018 at 09:04pm
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    @ Twisted;;Symphony
    I'm glad you like it! There are five to six more encounter depending on how long the next one is, so I will definitely be updating again soon.
    June 23rd, 2018 at 10:11am
  • Twisted;;Symphony

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    I am loving this so far! I can’t wait to see more encounters! And I love the way you’re writing it! Update soon!
    June 23rd, 2018 at 01:45am