La Douleur Exquise - Comments

  • Nereid

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    Oh my goodness thank you so much for this incredible comment! There was no rush to read it or even read it at all, I'm so grateful that you took the time to though.

    Henrietta's story is the one that I've put the most work into so I'm really glad that she is resonating with you a lot! Creating realistic characters is something I always try to do so I'm really glad that you seem to love them so much <3

    Thank you for answering my question too! I've ended up doing a mix of both with this story. It's still very rough, but I do make sure to read it through and make a few edits before I upload it.

    Thank you again for your lovely comment!!!!! <3
    July 12th, 2018 at 01:53pm
  • Iron Man.

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    This story so amazing! :O I'm so blown away by the imagery and the characters you've built up. Let's just say that words have escaped me that's how impressed I am. Sorry I didn't get to this sooner (like i said i would Facepalm) but I finally read both chapters and I loved it.

    My favorite part would have to be Henrietta realizing how uncomfortable she is with her body and basically her entire self really. It feels relatable to me somehow but at the same time, Susan's seemingly demure/timid yet outgoing and fun personality stands out and wow. All the characters have such great chemistry.

    All I can say is, I can't wait to read more.

    As for your question in your author's note, I dont mind uneditted stories during camp nanowrimo (or nanowrimo) but overall, I prefer writers to take their time with their updates and update when they feel comfortable and happy with the chapter.
    July 12th, 2018 at 06:39am