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  • watermelon sugar.

    watermelon sugar. (205)

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    I appreciate the way you write your drabbles for those such as myself who aren't familiar with the fandoms. You make it so we can still appreciate and enjoy the drabble. As always, your work is written so well. I love the drama. I love the imagery, especially in the ending with the laughter. Although the description is short, you could almost hear that same laughter and feel it. I appreciate how you stir that pot of emotions. Great work!
    July 13th, 2018 at 03:43pm
  • Shatterheart

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    I am a fan of the Final Fantasy franchise, but I have never got around to play FFVI! But this certainly makes me want to change that.
    As a fan of the franchise, I totally appreciate the drama and the details you have in this drabble. Like with the mentions of Espers! But I also appreciate how you wrote this drabble in a way so that people unfamiliar with Final Fantasy can appreciate and enjoy this piece without feeling like they are missing some vital information.

    You did a great job showing Terra's memories in a way that stirs the readers emotionally. Here's my rec for this drabble!
    July 9th, 2018 at 10:10pm