His Heart - Comments

  • keigo takami.

    keigo takami. (205)

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    This whole piece was just so adorable even if it talked about some deep subjects. Shane as a character was so relatable. I think the whole drabble felt familiar to me. Not so much as in, "oh, this is something I've read or seen before" but more so of, "Oh, this reminds me of the time ___ this happen." I like reading things that make me feel something or take me back somewhere. I also enjoyed his thoughts. You wrote this very well, it was such a wonderful read!
    July 12th, 2018 at 09:43pm
  • aubs

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    You know I absolutely love anything Stardew Valley, especially if you're writing it. And just by the summary, I have a feeling which character this drabble features.

    Just so you know, now that I've read the whole thing, I absolutely love this. And it isn't because I love the most out of all the bachelors, but because you really captured the moment so perfectly. I think this scene (or heart event) was my favorite in the whole game. It was just so cute... even though it talked about some deep subjects. Anyway, I really like his thoughts in this one-shot. They are something I could see him thinking.

    Anyway, I love this so much, if you couldn't already tell.
    July 12th, 2018 at 12:10pm
  • Nereid

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    This is so cute. I adore Stardew Valley and I do have a sweet spot for Shane as a character since he's so relatable to me. This was such an adorable piece of writing and it told a lovely little tale with a lot of background and weight to it. Really good!
    July 11th, 2018 at 07:13pm
  • Ghoul Scouts

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    This was so ADORABLE! OMGYES
    You captured Shane so perfectly in this piece as well! This piece brings up so many memories of my first time drinking a beer with friends. My reaction was the same as Denny's. tehe

    Beautiful job as always!
    July 11th, 2018 at 04:32pm