Grandma got ate by wolf, that's what happened :O Holy... This story definitely creeped me out in the second chapter and wow, if I thought you creeped me out before when you showed me the snippets then I was wrong. The whole story put together really creeped me out. You did a wonderful job with this rendition of Little Red Riding Hood.
I'm with everyone else, it's awesome and holy hell, a wonderful start and "Red"'s strained relationship with both her mother and her grandmother, idk why but that's actually relatable to me. I can't wait to see what happens next! (though I think i already know xD)
Oh this is cool! I like how you've started this story already. It's so gritty and really hard hitting. I like how you've made Red an unapologetically angry character, but in a manner that seems completely justifiable. She's not a default "nice girl" sort of character which make this story more interesting already!
Loved the way you started this, it really set the tone of the story and gave a little background on Red's childhood and the reason she hates her grandma! Can't wait to see what you do with the next chapter!