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  • Deathbat_Harlot6661

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    What a cute chapter. I'm so glad that Noah decided to stay after all
    October 15th, 2018 at 05:49pm
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    Love the update!
    October 15th, 2018 at 04:00pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    I don’t like that Sheridan didn’t answer her phone when Zach called. I feel like something bad happened to her. Of course Zach would buy a dog to bribe his kid haha!
    October 15th, 2018 at 03:58pm
  • AllTimePensFan

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    That was such a cute chapter! I can’t wait to see the relationship between Noah and Zacky grow even more! Keep it up!
    October 15th, 2018 at 07:10am
  • Fictional.Reality

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    I wonder if Noah thinks Zach is related to him somehow. Still, I have a weird feeling about Tobias and the way he has been acting, something is off. Can't wait for more!
    October 11th, 2018 at 02:53am
  • shortygirl

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    I knew he would apologize. I can understand him feeling a bit insecure. I love how Noah talks about zacky's tattoos.
    October 8th, 2018 at 04:47am
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    Loved the update. I can't wait to see what the secret question that Noah needs to ask Zack is :D
    October 7th, 2018 at 09:31pm
  • AJ9

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    Bloody Hell! I sense a lot of drama coming in the next few chapters. I sounds to me as though Noah has cottoned on to Zack being more than just mummy’s friend. I can’t wait until you updatae again, so I hope it’s soon xxx
    October 7th, 2018 at 08:22pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    I've read all three stories in two nights.. I have to say that your writing is wonderful. I can not wait to see what happens next with Zack and Noah. And Tobias needs to stop being a asshole! Please update soon!
    October 6th, 2018 at 05:20am
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    Loved the update. I can’t wait for the next one. Tobias is being a bit of an ass, with saying our son right in front of Zack, I’m sure no one would have to know it was Zack if he beat Tobias’ ass XD
    October 1st, 2018 at 10:45am
  • AJ9

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    Wow, Tobias a bit of an arse isn’t he? There was no need to say “our son” like that. However, I suppose he is trying to keep his family together and probably feels vulnerable and like it’s falling apart.

    I loved Zack’s interaction with Noah. I can’t wait to read more and find out what will happen when Noah meets the rest of the guys.

    Please update again soon xxx
    October 1st, 2018 at 08:29am
  • shortygirl

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    That was an adorable chapter by the way. I've heard the Mickey Mouse song way too many times with my nephews
    October 1st, 2018 at 03:23am
  • shortygirl

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    I wish Sheridan and Zacky didn't have such a toxic relationship.
    October 1st, 2018 at 03:22am
  • Fictional.Reality

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    As much as i love Sheridan and Zacky together, they seem so toxic to each other. Part of me wishes they weren't though because they have a family together. I don't know why but I've got this overwhelming feeling that tobias isn't as much of a saint as I think he is. He is way too perfect.
    October 1st, 2018 at 12:17am
  • Breepocket

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    Sheesh. That's intense. And Zack so loves him already and is so cute
    September 30th, 2018 at 09:44pm
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    It’s so good that he showed up! Noah is so adorable with his love of Mickey. I can’t wait to see how he reacts when Mickey shows! Why do I have a feeling that Zach an Tobias will have an argument if not a fight sooner or later. Keep up the good work!!
    September 23rd, 2018 at 08:01pm
  • Deathbat_Harlot6661

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    I'm so glad that Zack showed up. Can't wait to read it from his POV next.
    September 23rd, 2018 at 07:22pm
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    Loved the update, I can’t wait to see Zack’s POV
    September 23rd, 2018 at 03:30pm
  • AJ9

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    I can’t wait to read the rest of this in Zack’s POV. Please update again soon. xxx
    September 23rd, 2018 at 12:05pm
  • shortygirl

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    Im glad Zacky came alone. It was probably best. Zacky is still processing everything
    September 23rd, 2018 at 09:55am