We Can Try - Comments

Zacky seriously! You gotta stop doing this shit. He is the most dysfunctional drunk person ever

Zack, what did you do?

Loved the update. Can't wait for more

Poor Sheridan! How could Zack do that to her?!?!? Please update again soon. xxx

Love the update! I can’t quite believe that Zack would just leave like that how rude of him. I look forward to the next update

Oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh. What did she do? Like you had me tripping for a second because I was like there’s no way this can be how the story goes it’s all over.... nope not true. I feel bad for Tobias a bit but damn I hope she tells him cause he deserves to know.

This is gonna be a good one!!

Oh my god! I want more like now. I so can’t wait to see where this goes. Loved the chapter

Oooooooh damn.
Intense first chapter! Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Oh my god. I literally spent the whole day reading this series and I'm so god damn hooked. I can't wait to see where this goes. I agree with AJ9 about it not being Val's place to tell Zack such huge news, but yeah, can't wait to read more!

Okay 1) You’re welcome, and 2) I loved this first chapter! I hope that Zack finds out he has a son, although I think Sheridan has to tell him. It’s not really Val’s place to tell him such important news. I think that Val should tell him she’s seen Sheridan and where she’s seen her and then convince Zack to get back in touch with her. That way Zack will definitely find out about Noah for himself. Anyway, as I said, this chapter is great and I can’t wait for more of this so I hope you will update again very soon!!

Ahhhh! D:

Well holy fuck me sideways.

Ohh boy! I’ve got so many questions. Does Tobias know he’s not Noah’s father? Will Val tell Zach he’s a daddy? I wonder what’s gonna happen when he does.

Love the start to this and I look forward to the next update!

I knew it had to be Zacky's son. Does Tobias now?

Super excited!! Can't wait for more!

Woooooaaaahhhh I was not expecting that! Really interested to see how this plays out.

Very excited about this

Looking forward to the first chapter of this sequel. Hope you’ll be posting soon xxx