Fragility - Comments

I forgot how absolutely beautifully written and captivating this story was; I'm beyond ecstatic it's here again to read. Also, I apologize for not commenting before now, Fragility definitely deserves the love and feedback! I can't wait for a future update, whenever that may be. Thank you so much for posting this!

Your writing style is really interesting to read! The dialogue at some points could use a little work, but the descriptions are very well written.

Also, this story was a little disturbing, but I'm guessing that's what you were going for.