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  • Morty-smokes

    Morty-smokes (100)

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    Very spooky... excellent imagery, you could really feel the tension. You also took a really unique approach with the way you wrote this :)
    December 12th, 2018 at 02:22am
  • wish on a firefly

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    Damn. This is... spooky and creepy but I love it! :O You did a nice job setting up the atmosphere and making a game of hide-and-go-seek creepy as hell. Great job though!:O
    October 8th, 2018 at 12:00am
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