Sparrow Lane - Comments

  • A siren

    A siren (200)

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    Magazine Staff
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    20
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    Greece
    I love this! I really enjoy the brevity of this - it’s like a breath of fresh air. I like the shortness of the chapters and yet how much they tell. I can expect something very spooky with all this buildup!

    I’d just like to see more character in the narration. More skepticism/cynicism I guess? I feel a little disjointed and I feel like that could fix it!
    October 16th, 2018 at 04:08pm