I love this! I really enjoy the brevity of this - it’s like a breath of fresh air. I like the shortness of the chapters and yet how much they tell. I can expect something very spooky with all this buildup!
I’d just like to see more character in the narration. More skepticism/cynicism I guess? I feel a little disjointed and I feel like that could fix it!
I’d just like to see more character in the narration. More skepticism/cynicism I guess? I feel a little disjointed and I feel like that could fix it!