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invisible_smoke (100)

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@ LiveLoveLaugh781
Thank you so much. Update is coming as fast as I can write it :)

December 2nd, 2018 at 07:51pm

LiveLoveLaugh781 (100)

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I'm really enjoying this so far! The characters you've created are really interesting. I can't wait to learn more about these mysterious Novak brothers. Excited for the next update.

December 2nd, 2018 at 12:07am

invisible_smoke (100)

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@ RFarley1991
Thank you. Next chapter is on the way..just wait

December 1st, 2018 at 08:02am

RFarley1991 (100)

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Very interested in this story!!! Can't wait for next chapter!

December 1st, 2018 at 07:28am

invisible_smoke (100)

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@ Cupcake Violence
Yeah, sorry about that. Still trying to learn :) And thanks for the comment. Trying to get anotherone here as soon as possible :)

November 17th, 2018 at 10:30am

Cupcake Violence (100)

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I love the premise and your style!

Couple things though, some words have typos or are the wrong words entirely. For example when you wrote that he grabbed her when she brought him home you put he crap her. Lol but it's really really good so far!

I'm super excited to read more!

November 16th, 2018 at 12:38am

invisible_smoke (100)

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Thank you

November 8th, 2018 at 01:10pm

aqwszsedxcdfrfcvg (100)

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Great writing style!

November 7th, 2018 at 08:04pm