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  • Rogue Inferno

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    @Skella
    Thank you-thank you! I'm very inconsistent with names (or anything for that matter), so anything is still up for editing. Just seeing if it fits is all.

    This story is going to be a long one, so I'm excited to see where it heads too. I've got a lot more in store for the future!
    April 2nd, 2019 at 05:22am
  • Skella

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    I didn't realize you changed the title until today when I saw your name next to the update on my 'homepage'. I log in every once in a while so I guess I missed seeing all of the other updates. Anyways, excited to see there was 4.

    It's too bad Liam missed seeing Eli, and he only had a moment with Mary before stepping away with a stranger. I'm glad he took the offer from Alton though, with Noah's encouragement. Wasn't sure what to think of it at first but then their small conversation around the fire was interesting and I can't wait to see where it leads in the next update. Hurry up and sleep. Other things I can't wait to read about: glowing eyes, missing parts of his memory remembered, for them to reach wherever they are headed.
    March 31st, 2019 at 05:39pm
  • Rogue Inferno

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    @Skella
    Well you could say that. As for the home, we all shall see what's left of it.
    February 10th, 2019 at 04:27am
  • Skella

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    So he met a new voice in this one or am I misunderstanding that? Anyways, waiting to see what happens at Tierredaviid and find out who Mary and Eli are, see his home. I didn't think there was anything left of it.
    December 24th, 2018 at 03:14am
  • Rogue Inferno

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    @Skella
    I appreciate you reading it, and I'm glad you like it. I don't want to spoil anything, so I don't want to say anything that I'll regret later on. Though I can tell you that it will all make sense in the future, so stay tuned. Thank you again for giving this story a chance! Smile
    November 12th, 2018 at 05:58am
  • Skella

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    I was going to wait for you to get around to fixing what you shared you wanted to fix and add the summary before commenting but Cute oh well. It's really good. The voices turned out great, I don't find them confusing. I'm glad he has Noah too. I can't remember if you shared if the voices have names. And what happened to his family and what were the glowing things? They were eyes weren't they? Do we have similar brains? I can't wait to find out what happens next when you get around to adding more. I'll be waiting Arms
    November 12th, 2018 at 12:36am