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  • sportreader

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    Update please
    March 31st, 2022 at 06:23am
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    great to see this update!!
    March 4th, 2021 at 02:50am
  • Thatmom

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    Love this so much! Adjusting is something Mia is a pro at doing. Love their relationship!
    March 3rd, 2021 at 07:10pm
  • soupy

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    It will be interesting to see how Mia "fits in" in Pittsburgh. She is going to have to find something to occupy her time while Sid is busy with the team - and on the road. It will be quite the adjustment for her.
    February 3rd, 2021 at 09:05am
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    This makes me happy. Thank you
    January 29th, 2021 at 03:40am
  • Thatmom

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    LoveLoveLoveLoveLoveLoveLove:)
    January 27th, 2021 at 09:38pm
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    Hey! thanks for sticking around and for continuing to read this story :)
    January 26th, 2021 at 02:39pm
  • CharlotteWhite

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    Thanks for reading :) I will be updating soon
    January 26th, 2021 at 02:38pm
  • Thatmom

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    They may not agree on a way forward but they’re still communicating. Really love this story.
    January 24th, 2021 at 10:01pm
  • sportreader

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    Yes!! An update. Love it. Thank you
    January 24th, 2021 at 04:03pm
  • soupy

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    "Scotch and Sidney". Sounds like a terrifically satisfying cocktail!.
    This chapter was amazing. Good to see Mia and Sid are "working" together.
    Keep up the fantastic work
    August 15th, 2020 at 10:26pm
  • tmicks100

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    great update!
    August 15th, 2020 at 07:21pm
  • Thatmom

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    Thrilled that Mia and Sid are overcoming their obstacles and enjoying each other:)
    August 15th, 2020 at 03:35am
  • PensandCanes

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    Just got caught up on the last few chapters! Hoping to read more soon!
    August 9th, 2020 at 04:01pm
  • sportreader

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    Reading this and watching Sid scoring a goal.....joy
    August 4th, 2020 at 04:00am
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    I've been reading this store on Hockey Fanfiction. It won't let me log in to leave a comment. I love this story. If you don't get comments on the HOckey Fanfiction site...others might be having the same issue
    August 4th, 2020 at 03:35am
  • tmicks100

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    just getting to the latest update now, really enjoyed it - looking forward to them becoming more comfortable around each other after all that.
    June 8th, 2020 at 04:36am
  • soupy

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    Glad to see Mia is rebounding a bit. Yes, having sex for the first time can be quite traumatic - with all the built up expectations and emotions coupled with the physical issues that are experienced. But to have a partner who is considerate of all the issues and who is also willing to "google search" what to do in the aftermath certainly helps ease the awkwardness and embarassment.

    But for Sid to guarantee to Mia of being able to "experience levels of pleasure that you didnt know existed" - well, that was quite the statement.

    Mia will just need a bit of time before she can take him up on that!
    June 2nd, 2020 at 07:40am
  • sportreader

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    Loving this. Well-written story
    June 1st, 2020 at 10:16pm
  • soupy

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    I really admire the choices that you make in developing your story. It would have been a much easier direction to write Mia's "deflowering" as this magical culmination of all they had been through. This route is the one that a lot of authors would take. But you chose to explore the very real aspects of a couple moving their relationship to the next level - the "messiness" that can be involved - both physical and emotional. Despite how thoughtful and caring Sid had been throughout everything, it was not the encounter that Mia had probably imagined. It was painful, embarassing and incredibly emotional - and you portrayed that with incredible accuracy and sensitivity.

    It will be interesting to see how Mia deals with the encounter - and the ramifications that result from it. Intimacy is not just a physical act. Mia will have to learn to open up about her feelings - letting Sid in and have him be a part of this.

    Take care and stay safe!
    May 25th, 2020 at 03:54am