Consequences - Comments

Loved the update!

Loved it!

oh my lord. SO this is what you did with the prompt! I love it! :O It's honestly leaving me in awe and just wow. You know a person can only take so much abuse before they snap and let me tell you, it's sad and yet sometimes I commend them for being so brave for dealing with it. I can't wait to see what's in store in the next chapter for Bria.

Okay you started this with a bang and I love it! It was so intriguing and I was immediately drawn to the story... I do love a good novel that deals with the tougher subjects..

The second chapter, though short it does give you a glimpse into what her life became when she entered this new relationship and the heartbreak of it all... The controlling and manipulating... I am so excited to see where you take this. A great start! Keep up the amazing work

Chapter One-

Such a heartbreaking back story! It is very realistic, and I really feel for the main character!

Can't wait to read more!

Whoa!
Short, but straight to the point! I am really interested to see where this goes!

I would love to see/read more of a back story to why this happened as well!