I'm here judging entries for my Mistletoe and Wine contest!
Layout / Summary
Okay so the title of this totally made me think of Elf and I'm down for it already. The layout is cute, and the summary makes me curious. It's got that vagueness that makes me want to read on!
Content
I don't know what I was expecting from this, but this was far cuter than I thought it would be. I love that you went down the route of somebody giving back to the community for Christmas! It's not something I actually think about around Christmas time, which is awful, but there are so many people who don't have the money / means to have a merry Christmas and with Eve going to Hennessey House and giving to those less fortunate is just a lovely thought.
I also like the little Christmassy touches you have here and there - pulling your jacket closer around you, the hot chocolate, the cookies, it all just screams Christmas to me. I love that side of the winter season and you portrayed it really well here!
Concrit
The only critique I have is that I'd liked to have seen this developed a little more. There were aspects where you could have really delved into Eve's personality and shown her emotions behind the whole thing. It's not a massive thing, just something that would have made it that little bit better.
Overall
This was super-cute and really displayed the giving nature of Christmas. I really enjoyed reading this!
Layout / Summary
Okay so the title of this totally made me think of Elf and I'm down for it already. The layout is cute, and the summary makes me curious. It's got that vagueness that makes me want to read on!
Content
I don't know what I was expecting from this, but this was far cuter than I thought it would be. I love that you went down the route of somebody giving back to the community for Christmas! It's not something I actually think about around Christmas time, which is awful, but there are so many people who don't have the money / means to have a merry Christmas and with Eve going to Hennessey House and giving to those less fortunate is just a lovely thought.
I also like the little Christmassy touches you have here and there - pulling your jacket closer around you, the hot chocolate, the cookies, it all just screams Christmas to me. I love that side of the winter season and you portrayed it really well here!
Concrit
The only critique I have is that I'd liked to have seen this developed a little more. There were aspects where you could have really delved into Eve's personality and shown her emotions behind the whole thing. It's not a massive thing, just something that would have made it that little bit better.
Overall
This was super-cute and really displayed the giving nature of Christmas. I really enjoyed reading this!