So the biggest draw for me was just the language you use. It's so hypnotic and the flow of the words is almost like music. I really liked what I read but it felt like it needs to be part of a bigger piece, like there was more to learn about the school and the siren and what happens to the narrator. If you ever do write a second piece to this I would absolutely love it. I can only imagine how you would write an in depth description of the siren it would flow like water.
February 14th, 2019 at 05:19am