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  • limewire virus

    limewire virus (100)

    United States
    this was beyond this planet adorable. i liked how sensual this oneshot felt. rachel and mikaelea are a very cute couple, i enjoyed their strawberry moment and the ring moment
    February 28th, 2019 at 06:46pm
  • crldnvrs

    crldnvrs (125)

    Ghoul of 2016
    United States
    W o w okay so I wasn't expecting this at all, and it's good!! (I'm not sure how to address me, but we'll treat me as an OC so I don't have to feel like I'm talking in third person XD)


    “We can travel and see new things together. Get into some shenanigans in each town we stop at.”

    I honestly thought Rachel was going to say yes. I was really hoping she was. I do like that this oneshot had a bit of angst, but they both equally knew what they signed up for. With KP being on tour a lot, it takes a strong relationship to get through it.

    “Or maybe we can do some other kind of shenanigans backstage before I go on.”

    Oh my god, I screamed at this, because I actually pictured my reaction, and well you delivered.

    ”...my bunk gets lonely. You don’t even have to stay the whole tour; you can come for half of it. I just want you there with me in my adventures.”

    I kept telling myself “Rachel better say yes” because is the most romantic thing I've ever read!!! It wasn't cheesy, and I just...I could picture Mikaela kissing her knuckles one by one.

    Japanese cherry blossom shampoo sounds like it smells so good! I can't use it in real life, so I'd buy it to just smell it!! XD and how intimate the scene is, where they're washing Rachel's hair? That was super precious and I just...wow.

    ”...Think of it as a promise ring of the sorts, a promise that I’ll love you and treat you real good. You’re a goddess, babe. Like, you’re literally an angel, and I just hope you don’t fly away. You make me feel things I'd never thought I'd feel before.”

    FUCK this made me tear up, I need a King Princess XD. The fact that Mikaela gave Rachel a ring that means so much? Ugh. I love these two so much (*wink wink*).

    Thank you so much for writing this, Mari! I absolutely love it! ❤
    February 15th, 2019 at 02:43am