All I Need Is to See Your Face - Comments

  • jamais vu.

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    Chapter One

    I’m only one paragraph in and I already adore Stiles and Cherry’s relationship. The little rule that they have is funny and cute and god kill me already please. Cherry, my dear, Stiles is not a fool! He’s adorable. Drawing a frickin bee and making a pun just- hey, can Stiles be my bf please?
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    Stiles; who was toying with the cap of his pen between his teeth, because of course he was.
    The because of course he was made me laugh!

    Cherry is so good with Stiles. She’s so patient and caring and I’m loving it so much. Him writing I love you on the note made me so happy and you can tell he really does love her already.

    Chapter Two

    The chemistry between Cherry and Scott is so good! They’re so good as friends and I love how she pokes fun at him. And reading the next paragraph just… aaaaa, they’re all so good together! They just mesh together so well.

    I feel so bad for Stiles, knowing Cherry’s parents don’t like him and thinking she could do better than him. That breaks my heart, but you can tell that he isn’t letting that hinder his love for Cherry. And sdlkfj he agrees with her parents sometimes. Yup, my heart is breaking even more! Stiles, bb, you aren’t selfish for loving Cherry!
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    A teenager should have a bottle of Jack Daniels in her hand, not an assault rifle with bullets laced with Wolfsbane, surrounded by friends rather than ruthless strangers with some strange bloodlust for a creature that was featured more in fairytales than day to day conversations.
    Oof, I love this lil paragraph!
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    “Sometimes I think about seeing your boobs, too.”
    At least he’s honest lmao

    Chapter Three

    The way Stiles and Cherry work is so lovely to read. Like, they’re good on their own, but together they’re like a power couple?? They balance one another out so well and it’s so nice to read such a healthy, caring relationship.

    When Stiles’ Jeep breaks down and he kicks at the tire and is obviously getting upset, but then Cherry hugs him and he’s brought back down and calmed a little. I love that so, so much.

    Chapter Four

    I can see Cherry probably moving around a lot because of her family being werewolf hunters and knowing that they could move at any time probably terrifies Cherry. I can’t even imagine how much, especially knowing just how much she loves Stiles. Stiles probably wouldn’t take her leaving too well either.
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    “It’s the best.” Stiles grinned. “My Mom used to bring me here all the time.” Realising what he said though, Stiles paused, ducking his head a little bit.
    Oh no, my heart is going to start hurting, isn’t it?

    Yup, it’s hurting. God, Cherry is so good to him!

    OH MY GOD, it started out with them hating one another?? I’d love to read a fic or one-shot on their beginnings. Enemies to friends to lovers is my absolute weakness. And the fact that they’ve come so far makes me love their relationship even more!
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    “Happy tears.” Cherry reassured. “I love you so fucking much, Stiles Stilinski. What did I ever do without you?”

    Stiles thought for a moment, and Cherry braced herself for a stupid remark. “Share telepathic secrets with your twin?”

    There it was.
    My god, even I was getting emotional and then I started laughing at what Stiles said. I love how you make parts of your scenes so emotional and then are able to smooth it over with comedy. It’s so good and mad respect for being able to do that!

    Chapter Five

    The fact that Stiles trusts Cherry enough to bring her to the diner his mother would take him to warms my heart so much and if that isn’t proof of his love for her, I don’t know what is!

    The description of the food is making me really hungry btw. I’m going to go and get a burger and fries as soon as I’m done reading this. You make them sound so good, but also I’m a ho for food, so???

    Them talking about The Walking Dead was so cute, especially with how embarrassed Cherry got, but the fact that she thought of herself as more of a Maggie Greene made me so happy for some reason? I just really loved that nice little touch. And the fact that Stiles completely agrees with her just yesss (also, does that mean he’s her Glenn?????)

    THE ENDING WAS SO CUTE!! Stiles pumping his fist in the air after a victorious date and just thinking about how much he loves Cherry. Ahh, this was such a lovely read! You definitely make me want to watch Teen Wolf!!
    April 29th, 2019 at 02:07am
  • Brittt

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    it took me forever to read the last chapter but I LOVED IT. I really hope you post more stories in the near future because this was fantastic. Even a one shot of their future wouldn't be so bad. :tehe:
    March 18th, 2019 at 03:11pm
  • AngelicWasteland;

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    YES! This was a perfect ending to this, Cherry and Stiles are just so cute together. Stiles would make an amazing husband... Great story overall!
    March 15th, 2019 at 11:29pm
  • AngelicWasteland;

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    GIRLIE! Stiles and Cherry's relationship is adorable, seriously, plus you write Stiles so well. I'm also really happy that he's not overly hyperactive as well, like Cherry genuinely calms him... but he still has those quirks that make him Stiles. I don't knwo if that makes sense
    March 14th, 2019 at 12:00am
  • AngelicWasteland;

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    I'm excited! I love Stiles! This was a great start to this story, I really like Cherry already and I can't wait to see where you take it.
    March 12th, 2019 at 06:57pm
  • nearly witches.

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    Okay so 1) I love the layout and 2) I am so ready for this!!!!!

    So that first line after the dialogue? Love it. I love how it's just so easy to put yourself into that point. Forcing yourself not to smile is so difficult and literally fails 90% of the time so I'm loving it. So lighthearted and works perfectly with what follows. Also why can't any teachers ever write properly? I have relatively nice handwriting, so I'll need to adopt a chicken-scratch of my own for when I become a teacher lmfao

    BEE MY DATE. STILES PLEASE. DO NOT EVEN. I'm crying. Oh my god. Also I'm 100% enjoying that Cherry has a little bit of a joke and then goes right back to her education. You go girl! Ain't no man ruining her grades and I love that. It's different to the usual school-centric stuff I've read where somebody goes goo-goo-eyed over a boy and ignores the entire class, so I like that she's pushing Stiles off for her chemistry! And them both getting caught is a complete giggle. This entire chapter was just so light-hearted and I loved it all. I can't wait to read more!
    March 11th, 2019 at 11:06pm