April 12th, 2019 at 04:33am
@ fala amo.
Eeeeee thank you for the comment, dear. I was hoping to have the last chapter posted before you got around to this. Oops. :c
The prompt I found was more or less, "Someone is proposed to, the other person asks for time to think about it but leaves before giving an answer." Clearly I took some liberties with it, as I was actually really inspired by a relationship I was in previously. :l
Your feedback means a lot. It's more confirmation that I'm writing them correctly because everyone is perceiving them how I wanted them to be seen *~* So I'm really happy. I haven't written anything with characters in it in literal y e a r s so I was nervous about trying this again.
And thank you for pointing out the issues with chapter 3. I guess I was in a rush to get that one out heheh. I'll be going back to revise it soon.
You're the best! <3
Alright.
Chapter Five
Who the fuck swallows toothpaste.
I'm so glad Marjorie got out of there, good on her. And thank god that last paragraph confirms everything I already thought was true: he doesn't give two shits about her. Such a well written, infuriating (in a very good way) piece!