I'm Sorry I Wasn't What You Wanted - Comments

I really enjoyed this drabble! There was something very freeing about it like I felt a wave of relief in a way! To be honest, it almost makes me wish to have a fresh start as well, lol.

I really loved the way you wrote this with the two contrasting characters. The way you describe it is so simplistic, but also strong. It's very easy to imagine these characters, especially because both characters are incredibly relatable and so real. I find myself relating to them both, but also desperately wishing I could be more the character who takes the chance to go to Spain. I think that's what I really like the most about your drabble, the way it makes me reflect within your characters.

Loved it, well done!

I love this little drabble. How she let’s go of a bad relationship and drifts off into something freeing. How when she leaves to get on the plane, she’s leaving behind and has a fresh start. I really feel like it touches on things I’m going through as a young adult right now, too. So I identify with both characters. The one who is afraid to take a chance and instead sticks to the more traditional route and the one who is all over the place, unconventional, and searching from job to job. I don’t know who’s right. But I feel like both of the characters could represent just one: urging the other to take chances and leave the doubt behind. Or at least that’s what it means to me. Really great

I love this!

It's written in such a simplistic but impactful way. The contrast between the two characters can easily be the inner struggle inside one person. I mean, we all have that one side in us that craves adventures, learning new things, going to new places and meeting new people. And there's another side that's always cautious, afraid to try new things, worries about changes.

This is just beautifully written. Simple words, simple style but not less powerful.