September 13th, 2019 at 05:57pm
Oooh, date on a firing range?! Love it!!! Lots of "innocent" physical interaction... he can teach me to shoot any day
"So. You come here often?" -
Smooth!!He was wearing a moss green shirt that hugged his torso and tight, faded black jeans with his usual combat boots. -
Fiona was glad -- and quite pleased to discover that he was even better devoid of the glitz and glamour. - Couldn't agree more! He's just magic
It would be so hard not to research someone you've met that is actually somewhat famous. Like, I commend her for sticking to his professional profile and avoiding the personal. Helpful that there's not much out there, but still. It would be somewhat hard to resist. Hahaha.
"There are many things I can do with my hands, älskling, but that is not one of them." - Phew! Is it hot in here?
Tim seemed unaware of the sexual tension he'd created with a single sentence. - Mmm... may have seemed unaware, but I feel he was completely aware of what he just did. He is one smooth and sexy man!
P.S I appreciate the "Tim holding a guy" photos you added in the a/n. So thank you!!
Chapter Seven
Second date!! Woo!
Cliff diving? That is a cool second date! Love her thinking out of the box to try and appeal to his interests.
"I know a guy who can get you that record for free." - Nargh... he's just so smooth! I love it!
Okay, he's a daredevil! He's sexy and all... but I dunno if he could get me up on the top cliff. Alright... that's a lie. He probably could
His blue eyes were bright, and the genuine smile that graced his lips caused Fiona's already racing heart to flutter like a trapped bird. - Beautifully written
"You have a gift for reading people." - I suspect maybe not all the time...
I like that he's taking his time and easing into it... the whole gentleman approach is sexy as hell. But... I also fear that it's still kind of like a game. Is he genuinely interested in something real? Or does he just enjoy the subtle seduction that works by encouraging her to seduce him? Hmm... intrigued.
Chapter Eight
She hadn't mentioned this to anyone except Aria, but there was no point in lying to keep it hidden. - Can't say I blame her. She's excited and wants to stay in her happy little excited bubble without hearing negatives or being warned to be careful. We've all been there.
Hey! Mest! Fun fact: first band I ever wrote fan-fiction about... I have a Tony story on here I still need to finish. Hahaha.
"Her beau," Juliya said, affecting a Southern accent. -
"Are you gonna be all high-school-crush and like Motionless because he does?" - Okay, he's kind of rubbing me the wrong way... he's coming off really douchey!
"It wouldn't be so bad, but he keeps doing little things that are so damn seductive." -
Chapter Nine
Both men were humble and sweet, and Fiona had the tiniest crush on Mark. - I bet...
I love that he has to cancel... but still wants to see her. It's nice. Hard not to swoon over that... even if I'm feeling suspicious, I am still swooning!
His voice had a husky quality when he sang, adding a hint of sex no matter the lyrics. - Nailed it!!
"That I am very attracted to you, and I hope it's not a mistake," she admitted. - Mhm...
Oh... I just. I love the seduction, he is perfection... but argh! Nobody is perfect! So what is coming?! Is she going to get her heart broken?! Argh!
Chapter Ten
Uh-oh... meeting of the friends. I'm not worried about the girls, but I am concerned about the boys...
"You didn't tell me you were bringing my future wife." His English accent was the only thing that saved the line from being totally lame. - I like the line... the English accent would kill it for me. I am not a fan. Hahaha.
"Andy. This is my girlfriend, Juliya, and the Cocker Spaniel is Ben Bruce." - Cocker Spaniel
"What. The. Fuck?" October hissed, tugging Fiona a few paces away from Tim, Christian, and Jinxx. "How is he that hot?" - Girl... it's magic
Tim squeezed her hand. "It is fine." - I expect nothing less from the suave prince
"Mr. Bruce needs to chill. I wouldn't want Tim to get the wrong impression." - Argh... really dude? Harmless or not, bit of a dick move.
Tim rested his chin on her shoulder and Fiona smiled, opening her eyes. She saw that Ben was watching them. Noticing her attention on him, the grungy guitarist smirked. - Yeah, she's not hot for you, dude... she's hot for the guy with a genuine sexy accent
Welp! Four more to go until I've caught up!! I shall read them tomorrow
. She has someone now so she deserves some alone time with him to get to know him and other things lol. Loved it
Fiona wanted to seize his hand and drag him up the stairs, yet she wasn't quite that bold. - Pretty sure you wouldn't be doing too much dragging... I bet he'd be coming along quite willingly.
"Jag vill ha dig," he said huskily. -
In less than a minute, he had her out of her jeans and panties and on his lap. Her head fell back in pure bliss when he slipped inside of her... - Phew! Is it hot in here? *fans self*
This, Fiona thought. Nothing else seemed to matter at the moment. - Yeah, I'd find it hard to make plans for anything else if I were in her position.
"Is that why you don't wear normal pants at your shows?"
"The 80's did teach me a couple of things," he replied, chuckling. -
Chapter Twelve
Despite the fact that everyone who had been there knew what she'd done the previous evening, it was Aria that Fiona called as soon as Tim left her apartment late the next afternoon. - Well thus far she has been the most supportive and lease judgmental of all her friends!
"Bitch," Ashley grumbled just before she cut him off. -
Aria is probably right. The less details she gives the guys, the more they'll make assumptions and the less chance they have to understand her connection with him. As I've mentioned previously, I get that they're protective of her and don't want to see her get hurt again, but I honestly can't blame her for her reluctance to let them pierce her happy little bubble.
"Can it wait until after? -
Chapter Thirteen
They had gone to the beach and walked in the moonlight, the waves lapping at their ankles, Fiona quizzing Tim on whatever popped into her head. - Naww... that's cute!
She switched on the shower and waited for the water to warm, selecting a playlist that contained only music with which Tim was involved. - Ha! She's got it bad...
Love the text exchange. Their banter and general sexual tension is amazing! Although her final thought of him being perfect... I feel like this is setting up for the "if it seems too good to be true, then it probably is..."
"I fail to see why his age should negate all that." - I agree.
The chat with Ben was good. At least he appears a little more understanding and actually asks her questions about him with at least superficial interest. He's redeemed himself for me from the early chapter, I must admit. That's something, at least!
Also, I also can't help but giggle at 80's Tim...
Chapter Fourteen
"I want one," Fiona stated, watching the trio of sea otters that were peering curiously up at their audience. - Rob hears this statement from me regularly. Every time I see a cute animal. He just smiles, roles his eyes and shakes his head. Hahaha.
"I'm going to molest you and get us kicked out of here." -
After coaxing her to orgasm twice in the car, Tim basically had to carry Fiona up to her apartment. - Phew... well, he certainly delivered!
"You are insatiable," Tim stated. - I know he said it, but I hear him singing it...
I love that he is teasing her about not being able to wait... and yet he follows her into the shower. Hahaha. That man is apparently insatiable as well. Hahaha. Their cute little cozy night in on the couch is nice. Actually, all the time they spend together is sweet.
I'm being led to believe they are becoming quite the couple, but I feel like there's about to be a spanner thrown right in the middle of it. By him? Not sure. But I do look forward to finding out!!