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Oh Hels, you need to get out of that brain of yours, girl! You are going to do yourself in with overthinking every interaction!!!
Someone needs to get her properly drunk or high so she can finally start to chill a little! She needs a safe space, no boys allowed, where she can just rattle everything off and get it all out of her head, or she will forever be second, third, fourth guessing herself!

Hahaha, what a cute morning activity!! All of them playing 'baseball' with a tube of wrapping paper and a stress ball!! Hahaha, that is great!!!

Oh god, Tim!!! What a perfect response!!! AHahahahhahaha! I love it!!!
"No. I have a gun."

"You sure know how to bring a conversation to a screeching halt," Evie said teasingly to Tim. See, Evie knows where it is at! Hahahahaha

Oh, I bet he wouldn't have minded seeing her naked ;) I'm sure he can organise it, IF HE JUST LET HIMSELF!!!!!

OH man, interrupted again! They need to have a conversation, surely?! Its gunna get hella awkward if they dont...

Poor Danny, dont use him as a toy, Nero! RUDE! He deserves so much better than being a toy! HE IS THE SWEETEST HUMAN! STAY AWAY!!!!
Though I would definitely use Danny as a human shield against Nero if he were coming after Helena again... just sayin'

Her situation with Brian was no longer of any concern to Tim, and neither was she.
OH NO!!!!!! Tim, no!!!! That is not what you think!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!

It won’t let me add a table flipping gif to my comment lmao but I’m tots gonna flip a table because Bri made his move . Poor Hels having Nero making his move, Tim being subtle about his and now there’s Bri making his. Well poor in a that’s a lot of confusion to take in lol. Goodness. Loved it!

Helena was grateful no one took it upon themselves to announce that it was her birthday during the show. - Naww... I like that they respected her desire to keep things low key. That's really good of all of them.

Tim and Nero had declined the invitation to crash in one of the top floor suites, but the other two bands happily accepted. - Hmm, I bet!

Her party outfit sounds cute! Sure to turn a few heads; one of them I wish she wouldn't...

"Don't drink it," Helena warned. "If Bri mixed it, you could literally die." - That's the best kind!!

Helena blushed as Tim's hands found her hips. "Dance with me?" he asked, his breath cool on her burning skin. - Hard to be mad at him after an request like that...

Linking her arms around his neck, she looked away from his steady gaze. - I can't say I blame her. Especially if she's trying not to feel the feels he invokes in her.

"Älskling." Tim seemed amused. "You are babbling."

"Sorry," Helena mumbled. - *squeal*

Suddenly, Brian was at Helena's side, saving her from having to reply. "I need to borrow the birthday girl," he said to Tim. - Argh! Brian! You sexy pain in the ass!!

Her mildly intoxicated brain reasoned that this was a great idea. - Look, I can't say I object to her buzzed brain... they would make a cute couple. Argh, but Tim...

Oh, my god... Nero! Just go away you party pooper!

Argh, things are getting so messy and intense and I love it. Looking forward to seeing how poor Helena deals with this triangle... or is it more of a square?

Hahahah, I love that Danny did her make up for the show! He is just too cute!!!!

Naw, and the bands played her songs, but didnt make a fuss! They are so perfect!! And Tim starting with "(This is My) Elephant" definitely amps up that sexual tension! I mean, he is just not playing fair!!! :P

See, Danny is too cute!!! Them snuggled up together is just adorable! Anyone walking in on that would have to agree!

SEE! MORE ADORABLE! He did all the girl's make up! Because we all know he would definitely do the best job! He has skills for days!

Ohhhhh, them dancing is dangerous!
Tim shifted, bringing his body closer to hers. "I like this."
I am really hoping he didnt mean the music... ;)

Oh Brian, go away! Let Helena have some Tim time. I know you flew all the way in for her birthday, but cant you tell you are interrupting?!

Naw, that little sore spot of Brian flying in but Matt not :( I am glad she is happy for Tiff and Matt, but it must sting a little that he didnt accompany Bri.

BAM! Brian wasting NO time to get on in there! Maybe Hels will get lucky on her birthday after all! :D

Uh oh, he didn't answer her question about being drunk though... not sure if that is a good thing...

FUCK OFF NERO! God, EVERYONE interrupting the birthday girl tonight!
First Brian with Tim, now Nero with Brian! Someone HAS to look out for her, because this poor girl is getting cock blocked at every turn!!!

I am SO interested to see the aftermath of this!! Is she going to talk about it with Bri the next day? Nero is surely going to tell Tim... Oh Hels, a little mess you have gotten yourself into, my dear!!!!

HAPPY FRIDAY!!!

"Get out here!" he called. "You have some explaining to do!" - Uh-oh.. someone is in trouble!!

Brian!! Yay!! Adorable. He came to see her for her birthday... so sweet.

Naww, poor Danny. He's so hurt he didn't know of her birthday... but her reasons are justified. And at least he himself admitted that he would indeed have made a big fuss if he knew. I hope he understands her want for it not to be a public spectacle.

I'm surprised Matt isn't there for her birthday, tho.

Hmm, Tim is being weird. Is it jealousy? Or is that just my wishful thinking?

"I think you just want me to yourself." - Um, I would... just saying

Naww, that's a sweet birthday celebration. It's low key enough to not overwhelm her, but it's thoughtful enough to be meaningful. Good job, girls!

"And who would want to?" He smiled slightly. "Happy birthday, Helena." - I dunno why... but that felt a little bittersweet. I understand he has commitments, but I'm bummed he couldn't spend any time with her for her birthday thus far. Nero.. meh, I'm good with her not being around him. It usually ends badly...

Bahahaha! I am so not surprised that Evie has her eye on Brian... not surprised at all

That was an amazing way to celebrate her birthday. She may not have gotten to see all of her family in person but atleast she was able to hang out with Brian for it. Lmao Evie wants some new eye candy to stare at. I can only imagine what it’s gonna be like in that hotel. Loved it!

ITS HER BIRTHDAY CHAPTER!!!!!
I am so keen already, and all I have done is read the title :P

And a stray Brian appears!! :D YAYYYY!!!!
Hopefully this will help calm her homesickness, not make it worse!

Hahaha, oh Danny, figuring out that other people know its Hels birthday and he didnt... naw! I wanna give him a cuddle!
Who else knows it's your birthday?

Älskling
I immediately melted!! and uh oh, calling Evie 'Evelyn'... Tim is being Mr. Serious, isn't he?

Could cut the sexual tension in that bus with a freaking knife! Holy smokes!

Can I have a 3 hour lunch with Brian? Or a 3 hour dinner? Or just 3 hours? please?!

NAW!!! They surprised her!! So cute!!!And not too over the top because it is just her tour family, not the entire show, so they took her wants into consideration, too!
And Brian getting the boys and Tiff on the phone, such a nice touch!!

Helena arched an eyebrow. "It's my birthday. They can't deny me anything."

Tim chuckled. "And who would want to?"
I KNOW WHAT SHE CAN REQUEST!!!! Something that Tim could definitely not say no to ;)

Hahahahaha, AU Evie really makes me happy!!! I love the girls' reaction to her statement about eye candy!! Helena is totally right, completely swamped by eye candy! But Brian (and Till) are a little different to the glam boys they are used to...

I really want Evie to dig into Brian and quiz him... I mean, she is on the scent, he does spoil her. But JUST as a best friend?! or something a little more?

THANK YOU for this update!!! It was wonderful!!! :D
Also, breakfast food is the best kind of food. They nailed the catering ;)

I am about to read the update and I literally took a deep breath to prepare myself for whatever is to come...

I am so curious about the flirtatious manner between Danny and Nero. Obviously the easy assumption is that there's a romantic--or at least sexual--connection, but considering the nature of what Nero appears to be... maybe it's neither and it's more of a vampire/prey connection... or vampire/vampire connection? I am so intrigued!

Helena's attention was drawn to her right as Tim sat on the barstool next to her. - Ahhh, Tim

I must admit, the fact that he just says "Come with me" and she just follows, no questions asked is telling of how much more comfortable she seems with Tim. I dunno if Nero said that she'd be so quick to do the same. Not that I blame her at all. I'm 99% sure I'd do the same.

Naww... he's giving her a private show. That's really sweet!

Yeah... if pretty sure if I was her right now, my panties would've dropped to the floor; seated and all!

They worked together and there were still two weeks of touring left and hadn't she been minutes away from mounting Nero only a few hours ago...? - SO WHAT?! DO IT!

NOOOOO! For fucks sake, girls!!! Argh!!

Look, I'm not mad... I'm just disappointed So damn close! Argh! You're killing me... slowly, but surely, killing me. Oh, and I'm now super jealous that you got to hear those songs acoustically. Lucky!!

I wonder what is going on with Danny and Nero. How did her clothes not magically disappear when he begin his just for her acoustic set? I may or may not still wanna flip a table because now there’s tension with Tim. Helena is gonna snap if these two keep playing their games lol. Loved it!

Ohhhh, Nero can definitely get distracted with Nero!!! :P Leaves Helena more space to get distracted with Tim ;)

Though this is a very good point. Got me good!!
Would he fool around with anyone to avoid being alone?

Helena, you get down on your knee and propose to that man, now!!! HE MADE A FREAKING MEDLEY FOR HER?!?!?!
I think I just melted into a puddle... that is the fucking cutest thing... EVER!!!

HOLY SHIT!!!
I never thought I would want to kill the Goof Troop (what I am now dubbing Evie, Poppy, Danny and Rob, plus Kendall when he joins in, too).
BUT GUYS!!!!!!!!! YOU JUST COCK BLOCKED THE SHIT OUT OF THEM!!!!
I AM DYING!!!!!!!!!

Thank you for the update, BUT HOLY SHIT! I am even MORE on edge now with the DEAFENING sexual tension between Hels and Tim

Why is there no table flipping emoji? I would totally flip a table right now lol. Somehow I think Danny is gonna end up finding out its her birthday. And then it’s gonna be this massive event lol. It’s so teasing but it’s so good. He’s toying with her and we’re all feeling it lol. Loved it!

@ PhenoBarbiDoll

Look, Tim is respectful and a gentleman! And clearly wants more than to just eat her... well, maybe in sexual way. But we all know Nero just wants to suck her dry! Hahaha

To summarise: I still feel bad for Magic. He’s over there being a good guy and gets no rewards for that!

@ kiss my sas

I was rioting on my couch like a maniac, don’t worry. I’ve calmed down to a more “whatever, Nero ain’t got shit on Magic.” attitude now

@ Damsel of Darkness

@ kiss my sas

In Helena's defense, Nero is making moves and Tim isn't

Damsel of Darkness:

Poor Tim gets no love... but she's giving it up for Nero like she's on heat. Hahaha:

This is perhaps the best thing I have ever read!!
Pheno just reminded me that I wanted to come back and read your comment because I knew you were going to riot, but this sentence made my entire afternoon!!!!

Not necessarily a romantic couple, but they undoubtedly went together. - Psst! Romantic couple for the win!!

"Better not let Zack see you as Minnie." - Hey, I'll be his Minnie any day...

She didn't want him to know she was trying to avoid sitting across from him. - Argh! Go sit with him! Better yet, go sit in his lap...

Ooooh! Evie and Rob! Well surely there was bound to be a hook up somewhere along the line that didn't involve Helena... they are all in close quarters for days on end

Tim hesitated, but as her scowl deepened, he sighed. "Have it your way, lilla du." - I can't see him letting her birthday go by without making a little fuss... even if it's one on one fuss. Or is that just wishful thinking on my part?

At the side of the stage, Evie and Poppy catcalled loudly. -

He was leaning casually against the bar, staring at Danny with that oh-so-familiar smirk in place. -

She had believed the tour would get easier, that she would get used to Tim and Nero and impervious to their odd brand of charm. - Mmm, such naivety!

And she had only made it worse by losing herself with Nero in New York. - Argh... don't remind me

"Du riechst wie beute," - Dude... creepy!

What the hell am I doing? - Good fucking question!

I think the fact that Nero really doesn't do it for me is probably why I'm so anti Nero/Helena pairing. He's got nothing on Tim for me. Hahaha. Plus Nero's whole persona is just... creepy. He comes across as literally wanting to eat her... not even in the sexy way... where as Tim appears to genuinely care about her. Poor Tim gets no love... but she's giving it up for Nero like she's on heat. Hahaha.

I still love it, though. Just not Nero

@ PhenoBarbiDoll

Because it is delightful for everyone involved ;)

@ kiss my sas

Why do I keep pitting those two nationalities against each other? :P

@ PhenoBarbiDoll

No worries, I was too impatient to find out, so googled it ;P My bad!
Any other language always is sexy! And now he can go toe to toe with Tim speaking in another language too! Swedish Vs. German...

@ kiss my sas

I'm glad you mentioned the German. Totally forgot to translate in the A/N. Haha! And I included it because Nero posted in German on Instagram a while back...so I guess he knows German, maybe? Whatever. I just thought it was sexy

Hahhaha, you better freaking run and hide from the wrath coming to you!! Even though it was perfect, lust edged with fear, those girls are going to throw things at you.

But lets start with the first thing I HAD to comment on
Helena snorted with amusement. It was an ongoing joke in the Avenged family that Zacky had a hard-on for Minnie Mouse. For multiple costume parties, the rhythm guitarist had posed as Walt Disney and encouraged his dates to portray the animated mouse.
That had me laughing so hard!!! I had never quite thought of it as 'a hard on for Minnie' before that! It got me good!! Hahahahaha, still laughing!! :P

Oh hells yes, Evie! You get that ginger loving ;P I love how both Hels and Tim had questions, but both blew past it without words.

I CANNOT WAIT to see what they do for Hels birthday!!! Certainly it isn't going to be as sedate as Hels is hoping for, but they know how to push her without breaking her, so it is going to be awesome!

So, after that little encounter with Nero, things are going to get a hell of a lot more complicated for our girl! She is struggling wrapping her head around the kiss in NY, this is going to make her head spin further!!!
I cannot wait to see if Tim is going to find out!!! Urgh!

And that little hint of German in there (which of course I couldn't keep as a surprise, I HAD to translate it - holy shit!), if that doesn't emphasise the difference between Nero and Tim, nothing does!!!

More please :D I fucking ADORE this story so damned much!!!!