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  • Vixyn of Shadows

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    If something doesn’t happen between Helena and Tim soon I might flip a table lol. Although that moment with Nero *waves face*. Lmao well if they’re gonna act like that when she shows off the cleavage and ass no wonder she down plays it lol. I looooved it.
    September 14th, 2019 at 06:00am
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    An honest-to-God corset was pushing her breasts practically to her chin, a thin strip of stomach left visible above the tiny leather shorts that barely covered her ass. Torn black fishnets and her usual boots completed the ensemble. - *whistles* hell yeah! Go for it, girl! Flaunt it!

    "Oh. My. God." Evie looked her over and immediately grinned. "If I liked girls, you'd be in trouble." - Bahahaha! I bet Wink

    "I'm supposed to be a serious musician!" - Who says you can't be a serious musician and looking sexy while you're at it?

    Hahaha! Love how the girls just bail instantly and leave her to face whoever is coming onto the bus... I'm hoping for Tim, honestly. But I'm nervous you're gonna slap with me Nero.

    Argh. It's Nero. Sigh.

    Today, it was something like excitement dancing on the borderline of fear. - LISTEN TO THE FEAR! Coffee

    See? Tim checks her out and it's still gentlemanly! Nero... he looks at her like he wants to eat her. And not in the good way!! File

    lmfao I love Danny's reaction! I swear, his is the most honest of all of the guys! I love how he makes her blush at the comment of it being lucky she's behind the drums so she doesn't distract Tim and Nero... although I feel like she will no matter where she is in their vicinity.

    With the hint of a smile playing at the corners of his mouth, Tim sauntered out of the venue. - Argh... even that is just super sexy! tehe

    He looked over his shoulder and saw Danny sliding a pair of Minnie Mouse ears onto Helena, who was laughing. - Nice touch Wink

    Stepping back toward the drum riser, Tim let his gaze again move over Helena's upper half. - Naughty

    "You two." She brought out her phone and aimed it at Tim and Helena. "I mean, act like you know each other." - Yes! I love you, Evie!! In Love

    She was a Disney wet dream. - Not the worst thing a girl could be described as... lmfao

    Damn right they make a beautiful couple!!! Make it happen already, Tim! For fucks sake!! Twitch

    He had experienced that familiar ache in his jaw... - Lick

    Well, you've made my Friday night with this update and Dark Secret Love! You spoil us... and I love it! Arms
    September 13th, 2019 at 10:27am
  • kiss my sas

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    You, are the best human!! Happy fucking Friday :D :D :D

    Hahahaha, I love that the girls played dress up with Helena! And the one-liners both had, hilarious
    "If I liked girls, you'd be in trouble."
    "A serious musician with nice tits and a great ass."


    OH Nero liked what he saw!! Urgh, imagine getting THAT look from him when he was all ready for the show... I would drown in drool, I think...

    AHAHAHHAHHAHAH
    DANNY!!!!! Oh my god, I just cracked up!!!! How can this line be so fucking PERFECT!!!!
    "You fabulous bitch!"

    Naw! Helena in the mouse ears?! Too cute a visual!!!

    Oh, I bet Tim needed to get out ASAP after that smoke show... Though I am not happy he isn't just instinctively acting on his thoughts and desires ;)

    Evie is a little devious, and I adore her!!! Hetting them together for the photo. Gah, what a great wing woman ;)

    And again, why is Danny so fucking cute and perfect?!
    "I want a picture with the Disney wet dream!" Danny said.

    And Helena pointing out that she has been a woman the entire tour is just magical. Poppy and Evie did such a good job opening the boys eyes to what was literally right in front of them! ;)

    Damn right they are a beautiful couple! Tiff is right on the money ;)

    GAH! This is so perfect!!! Please just update all the time? I can pay you*!!

    *Please note: payment is in love
    September 13th, 2019 at 08:53am
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    I'm so excited!! Crazy

    Running her fingers through the wavy strands, she emerged from the limited confines right as Nero stepped into view. - ARGH! Noooo!!! Nero! Where the hell is my rolled up newspaper?!

    Why was such a simple gesture so ridiculously seductive? - oh god, now I need to smack her with the newspaper?! Facepalm

    It felt so good just to be touched and kissed. - I am sighing so heavily right now... I get it. She's confused and attracted to him... but... NO! Hand lmfao

    Her heart gave a particularly violent thump as another bolt of almost-fear shocked through her. - Yes! Because he's creepy and bad and wrong and no! Hahahaha

    She was horny, but the disconcerting vibes surrounding Nero still existed. - Thank god! Girl has at least a little bit of sense about her!! Look, I get it, she is attracted to him... but I just cannot support this. Hahahaha. Her connection with Tim is too strong and I cannot let that go. Hahaha.

    I love her slight attempt at avoiding Tim by claiming it's late... that may be the case, but you still got up and went to him over just a whisper of your name... Whistle

    "I'd love for you to teach me 'Roses'." - naww... see?! Perfection.

    Okay, I may have flipped a table (fucking lost it when I read that... lmfao) but I get it! They feel like dark and light... so it would only be natural she'll be drawn to both and they're both clearly drawn to her. Doesn't mean I will support it! Fuck the newspaper, I'm getting the damn garden hose to turn on Nero! Or a fire hose!!

    As usual, I felt a roller coaster of emotions so of course I want more!!
    September 10th, 2019 at 12:43pm
  • kiss my sas

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    @ PhenoBarbiDoll

    And I am okay with this ;)
    September 10th, 2019 at 02:46am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    @ kiss my sas

    I will yank you back and forth between teams Tim and Nero a couple more times before it's over :P I can't help it. Nero is too pretty to not be played with, at least a little tehe
    September 10th, 2019 at 02:45am
  • kiss my sas

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    HOLY SHIT!!
    I was far too distracted with the first part of this chapter that I totally didnt even think to comment on it! I got too swept up in what was happening between Hels and Nero!
    SO MANY THINGS TO COMMENT ON!!!
    1) I bet part of her is pissed that he came back. She just wanted some alone time! But no, she had to be interupted
    2) SO MANY MORE WEIRD THINGS ABOUT NERO CAME ABOUT! The dark droplet, the insane changing of his eyes, the taste of his kiss!!!
    3) As you expected, I kinda dig the Hels/Nero.... I mean, that tension between them, whoa!
    That being said, I am glad she didn't let herself get swept away with her lust not to think rationally!!!

    Naw, Tim is such a sweetheart!!!! Now I am back on team Tim :P Thought the wander through Nero town was certainly exciting :P
    That second last paragraph though... oh Tim, what do you know?! :P

    Good luck dealing with Damesl after this. Shit is going to go down!! :P
    September 10th, 2019 at 02:42am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    It's so weird writing Nero this way now that I've met him. Haha. He is really sweet and easygoing.
    September 5th, 2019 at 09:50pm
  • MsGates

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    I've been to a vampire ball so this update brought back some great memories. But Helena where are you going?! Also Nero makes me uncomfortable but it's not all bad lol
    September 5th, 2019 at 07:06pm
  • Vixyn of Shadows

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    A vampire ball sounds really fun. Especially with that bunch. Tim’s more perceptive than she thought cause he knows she’s attracted to him. Nero creeps me out lol. Loved it!
    September 3rd, 2019 at 02:41am
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    @ kiss my sas

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    I just realized I screwed up when editing this, so I have fixed it. Lol. For future reference (the next chapter), I need to tell y'all that they don't stay at a hotel that night. Facepalm I had originally planned for them to, then I figured out my plan worked better on the bus...but forgot to change it before updating.

    Just didn't want there to be any confusion when I post again. Cute
    September 2nd, 2019 at 07:01am
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    You are my hero right now! I am having a hectic day at work, so I am so glad I have an update to read while I eat my lunch! In Love Hail

    The older musician sighed as every eye in the room fixed upon him. "This is the last time I tour with two bands and a crew made up entirely of young people." - Hahaha! Oh, Tim... maybe you should ask one of those young people--cough*Helena*cough--to hang out with you at the hotel. Alone. In your room. Mr. Green

    He was in a gray button-down, a black vest, black pants, and black boots. His white-blond hair had been halfheartedly slicked down, and there was a hint of liner emphasizing the blue of his eyes.

    He looked devastatingly gorgeous.
    - Swoon

    Naww! I love that he is her escort... sorry, Kendall. Haha.

    Argh... he's even sexy when he is just advising her of the limited alcohol options! I love that he gives a little dig about her drink choice and she counters right back smoothly. I so do love their little back and forths... there's just so much tension!!

    Catching her hand, he lifted it to his lips and brushed a kiss across her knuckles. - Oi! I already warned you about that! Cut it out! She's not for you! Tim... do something, man!!

    Helena was struck by the odd thought that he was the darkness that balanced Tim's light. - Yes, well, go towards the light!!! Snob

    There was an emotion in Nero's black eyes that caused her to take a step back, inadvertently pressing against Tim. - Yes! Good girl! Arms

    Oh my... Swoon He really pushed her with that.. but man, he's not wrong, so I can't really be mad at him. She is attracted to him. She does have functioning eyes, after all! Happy face I get her hesitance and why she couldn't admit it, but I'm still a little frustrated! Argh! Just go with it, Helena! For all of our sakes! Crazy

    Oh, Matt and Tiff are on a second date?! Adorable!! Cute

    Okay. She bailed. Does he go after her? I sincerely hope so. Maybe they can have that alone time in the hotel I mentioned earlier?! Naughty But I swear, if Nero follows her... Threat

    Thank you for brightening my day!! And congrats on your team winning! Oh, and have a blast at Backstreet Boys! Crazy
    September 2nd, 2019 at 06:15am
  • kiss my sas

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    I get so excited when I see this is updated!!!

    I would not be mad at seeing those boys all dolled up in their finest... trying not to drool on my keyboard as we speak imagining the suits, the make up, the all over insane sexiness they would scrub up... urgh!

    I love how Evie is pushing them together!! Subtly, but oh so perfectly!!! Keep pushing, Evie!! :D

    Ohhh, so she got out of that bind! Lucky timing on Tiffs behalf...
    I am not pleased she took off, but I can understand it. Someone needs to have a chat with Hels and check in, make sure she is okay before telling her to get her shit together and face Tim ;)
    September 2nd, 2019 at 05:11am
  • Vixyn of Shadows

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    Man Nero is into some freaky shit. Blood play would be a hard pass lmfao. Awe that’s sweet he actually asked her if it was okay that he asked Tiff. Goodness she’s gonna be so frustrated if she keeps thinking about sex. That’s gotta be hard not being there for his bday. Loved it!
    August 30th, 2019 at 03:56pm
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    Um, did you also read the tension between Tim and Hels? Because that was THICKKKK
    But you know me, I ain't gunna complain about Nero having fun :P
    August 30th, 2019 at 07:49am
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    @ kiss my sas

    You ladies are SO biased :P Let Nero have some fun, too! tehe
    August 30th, 2019 at 07:38am
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    YAY!!1 Happy fucking friday!!! This updated and Dark Secrets?! You spoil me so!

    I love that Hels finally brought up the fact that the others are always on her bus. I mean, that is a very good point! But they have a whole bus for three people!! They should definitely share their room :P

    There is something so playful and almost sibling like with the banter between Tim and Evie. I really love it! :P Its just so fun with no undertones of anything but being assholes to each other :P

    Poor Hels having to be away from Matty for his birthday! I can't imagine the boys would ever do a sedate, chill birthday, so it must suck thinking that she is missing out on the party, chilling with her family and making her even more homesick, I am sure. Poor sausage :(

    MATT AND TIFF!!!! I ADORE that it goes both ways!! We know Tiff was always interested, but now Matt is too?! FUCK YEAH!!! Cannot wait to see what becomes of them :P

    Now, this Nero business... I love the mystery that is unfolding!! Little snippets here and there, more and more unveiling. I LOVE IT!!! :D

    I am with Damsel though... SHE IS NOT FOR NERO!!! :P
    August 30th, 2019 at 07:35am
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    Well, she's not! I have decided that. I don't know what you--the writer--intends, but I feel she is for Tim only. As far as Nero is concerned, she's got a chastity belt on!
    August 30th, 2019 at 06:52am
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    Oi! Stop that! She is not for you! Grr -- That literally made me laugh out loud. lmfao
    August 30th, 2019 at 06:46am
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    Kicking Punk Crazy

    UPDATE!!!

    Okay, lets do this! I'm pumped! Weight Lift

    What in the hell has Nero been doing? Helena wondered. - Indeed! Rough sex shouldn't result in blood... but I suppose there's more than that going on, yes? Think

    Tim shook his head, a slight smile curving his lips. "I have spoiled all of you." sigh... you can spoil me any day, just sayin' tehe

    Oh, she is so curious about Nero now... considering if he enjoys pain with his pleasure... he's always seemed a lil dangerous to me throughout this story. He definitely has a darker edge to him, for sure!!

    He smirked and made a show of looking her over. His expression became contemplative as he finally took a sip of Heineken. - Oi! Stop that!! She is not for you! Grr

    "I was thinking about asking Tiffany to be my date." - YES! I almost forgot about those two... that's amazing that he's finally waking up and seeing the opportunity in front of him! Go Matt! Do it!

    Sad she can't be there for his birthday, but I'm sure the shoe has been on the other foot many times when he's been on tour. It's not like she doesn't want to be there after all Smile

    I live for the one on one moments between Helena and Tim... like, seriously. I love that he asks her questions and makes an active effort to get know her and ask her opinion and feelings on things. It's really sweet and shows he actually gives a damn, which is nice. And her recollection of the night when she was DJing kills me coz I want more of that, but I also like these smaller, somewhat more meaningful moments too. As much as I'm dying for them to rip each others clothes off and go at it... I am liking the slow pace. I will regret saying that, I'm sure... but hey, as long as you keep giving me one on one moments, I can deal... maybe... for a little while.

    Anxiously awaiting the next update!! Mr. Green
    August 30th, 2019 at 06:43am