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    I guess there’s only one way to find out! Keep tuning in, maybe your instincts are correct, maybe they’re not *shrug*
    May 15th, 2020 at 07:30pm
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    I agree with Fletcher, though. It shouldn't be let go! She needs protection because someone is likely to come and finish what (s)he started. Unfortunately, I still think there has to be a person in a position of power and authority who knows...something. My antennae have been up since the police chief and Ciara were both at The Shell Shack Shifty
    May 15th, 2020 at 07:04pm
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    I’m glad you’re still enjoying it! I love that you’re considering everyone could be involved, and not just her friends.
    April 20th, 2020 at 10:35pm
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    It's good that she still has someone she can go to for help. I know her trust in, well, everyone has been frayed, but at least there's one person who seems to truly want to help her...for whatever reasons.

    I'm not opposed to Ambrose's suggestion of going to the police. She doesn't remember much and can't give them anything besides that note and piece of fabric. On the other hand, talking to them might allow her to gauge the absolute strangeness that is going on around her. What if the police are somehow involved? Even if just to the extent of looking the other way while someone torments her.

    I hope Ambrose gets struck by some other idea. I'm afraid it's gonna take another package before they can come up with any halfway solid lead.
    April 20th, 2020 at 05:02pm
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    Think Hmm I see...
    April 9th, 2020 at 08:54am
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    My first thought was that maybe something else had been done to her, some kind of assault. But it honestly could just be a simple taunt, someone unable to risk gloating (in a sick way) because they know she's basically clueless at the moment. Too many suspects, not enough leads.
    April 8th, 2020 at 06:50pm
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    Haha I knew that would get you! Hoping you’ll love the next chapter then. What do you think the note means though?
    April 8th, 2020 at 06:45pm
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    WHAT?!?!?!? You can't leave me there!!!!!!!! Ohhhhhh my God! Crazy There are a lot of implications in that package, and more specifically in those words.
    April 8th, 2020 at 06:36pm
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    I mean, yeah, I get that. It’s supposed to show how strained things are in the house, opposite of their outside lives.

    Ooh! I love keeping readers on their toes! Wink
    April 3rd, 2020 at 06:59am
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    Whoa! Harsh confrontation with Mom! Though I'm not going to say that it shouldn't have been said... I've seen what happens when families (in particular) pretend everything is fine and never air their grievances. Life can get very tense and fake after years of not talking.

    Well, that sounds suspicious. But maybe Zoey is talking about something else. I can't stand the thought that her sister had anything to do with it!
    April 1st, 2020 at 05:48pm
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    Ooh is someone suspicious of Ambrose? Surprised and I absolutely love your theories, very cool! Very Happy
    March 14th, 2020 at 06:43pm
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    She's right. Since Ciara knows, Ashley can just play dumb and act like she isn't even on the list of suspects -- to both Ciara and Ambrose, if it comes to that.

    Okay, so... Maybe she's NOT alive. Maybe this is one of those in-limbo deals where the victim wakes up and goes on about his/her day before gradually noticing that certain little details aren't right and realizing that s/he is in an altered version of reality! And now she has to figure out what happened so she can be at peace! Think
    March 14th, 2020 at 06:23am
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    I guess we’ll just have to wait and see ... thanks for commenting!
    February 8th, 2020 at 10:59am
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    So Ciara knows something. That in itself isn't necessarily a shock, but what in the hell was she talking about? Whose business did Ashley allegedly stick her nose into? And how could it be bad enough for them to drown her? Do any of her other friends -- or sister -- know? Were they involved?

    And what is up with this whole town???

    Still so many questions. And God, I hate Ciara. But every school has someone like that Rolling Eyes
    February 7th, 2020 at 11:36pm
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    I love that it’s keeping you guessing
    January 12th, 2020 at 10:36pm
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    I admire her for being able to go to work and even somewhat focus, all things considered. Oh no! A hot police chief? That's...dangerous.

    Gotta admit, the exchange with him was rather odd. As is Ciara's reaction to him being there. I'm starting to suspect that something is off with her whole town, and her murder is only the half of it.
    January 12th, 2020 at 10:06pm
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    Yes, I love to keep them guessing! Thanks for your support :D
    November 9th, 2019 at 03:12pm
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    I don't blame her for going where there's at least some comfort, and where someone listens without judgment. Weirdly enough, when I read about the blurred humanoid figure following her, I thought of the evil shadows in Ghost...though it has been years since I've seen that movie.
    I'm so at a loss as to how she can solve her murder, and I love it! Mr. Green
    November 9th, 2019 at 02:47am
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    I didn’t even get the notification you’d commented ! :O I’m sorry about that. I am glad, however, that you’re liking Ashley so far Very Happy
    October 9th, 2019 at 12:58am
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    Oh wow. So her home life isn't very happy. Obviously there's a lot of tension. How can she transition to her attempted murder from the attack/accusations by her parents? I mean, there's no good way to say "I think someone I know drowned me -- and FYI, my sister is on the suspect list." My sympathy for her grows with each chapter.
    October 1st, 2019 at 11:07pm