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  • MarryMe

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    @ PhenoBarbiDoll
    Yes, I love to keep them guessing! Thanks for your support :D
    November 9th, 2019 at 03:12pm
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    I don't blame her for going where there's at least some comfort, and where someone listens without judgment. Weirdly enough, when I read about the blurred humanoid figure following her, I thought of the evil shadows in Ghost...though it has been years since I've seen that movie.
    I'm so at a loss as to how she can solve her murder, and I love it! Mr. Green
    November 9th, 2019 at 02:47am
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    @ PhenoBarbiDoll
    I didn’t even get the notification you’d commented ! :O I’m sorry about that. I am glad, however, that you’re liking Ashley so far Very Happy
    October 9th, 2019 at 12:58am
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    Oh wow. So her home life isn't very happy. Obviously there's a lot of tension. How can she transition to her attempted murder from the attack/accusations by her parents? I mean, there's no good way to say "I think someone I know drowned me -- and FYI, my sister is on the suspect list." My sympathy for her grows with each chapter.
    October 1st, 2019 at 11:07pm
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    @ dezzy
    Oooh thank you so much! I hope you’ll keep reading, they’re infrequent updates but, just FYI.
    October 1st, 2019 at 08:46pm
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    I've only read the first two chapters, but so far I'm really liking it! I can't wait to keep reading!
    October 1st, 2019 at 08:25pm
  • MarryMe

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    @ PhenoBarbiDoll
    Secrets are amazing, aren’t they? XD it might not rank high but she loves her friends and wants to make them feel nice and comfortable. As for her parents, you’ll find out more about them next chapter Smile

    Everyone needs to be a suspects though Wink
    September 7th, 2019 at 05:00am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    So now she thinks it might have been based on something she learned at the gathering. Interesting. And now Ambrose thinks they need to find out who the woman is that called his dad? I mean, I understand that morbid curiosity to know who your dad is (allegedly) cheating with, but I don't figure that mystery ranks very high for her right now. Lol.
    How is she going to convince her parents not to call the police immediately? If she tells them the truth, they're gonna want to know who did it and want to feel that she can be kept safe.
    And I still hate that her friends are suspects...
    September 7th, 2019 at 04:53am
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    @ PhenoBarbiDoll
    Asking the big questions I see! Smile honestly I’m so glad you like it! Well, I guess you have to wait and see... everybody lies. Thanks for commenting! Mr. Green
    August 16th, 2019 at 10:00am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I like this look into the group and her relationship with each of them. And based on that, I don't want any of them to be guilty. I'd much rather believe it was Ciara. Lol. But I am definitely interested to see how this unfolds. How will she even begin the investigation? What questions will she ask to weed out the innocent? And...will she see it through? I mean, how badly does she want these answers if they're only gonna break her heart?

    I am totally into this, in case you couldn't tell. Haha. I love stories like this!
    August 16th, 2019 at 07:06am
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    @ PhenoBarbiDoll
    Aww thanks for commenting. Yeah, I guess now we just wait to see who is innocent and who is guilty. Glad you’re enjoying it so far! Smile
    July 24th, 2019 at 12:36am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    That's so frightening! I mean, the whole scenario is, obviously, but the idea that the people you trust most may know something and/or have a hand in it? I'm not sure I'd have the nerve to face them all at once, though that is the best way to get the truth and prevent them from giving her the run-around.
    July 24th, 2019 at 12:28am
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    @ PhenoBarbiDoll
    Thank you so much ! Sorry, I wasn’t notified that you’d commented otherwise I’d have replied sooner
    July 15th, 2019 at 10:00pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I love stories like this! Great job on the intrigue so far Cute
    July 13th, 2019 at 08:04am
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    @ AngelicWasteland;
    aww, thank you. Yeah, I want to keep it as mysterious as possible. Thanks for commenting ☺️
    July 12th, 2019 at 10:44pm
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    I really like the whole mystery behind this, there's no background, no flashback just the reader learning with the main character.
    July 12th, 2019 at 10:39pm