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  • Twisted;;Symphony

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    BREAK?! What break?! Ooo I want details! Especially if it’s gonna shine a light on why Melissa is so angry and why Enzo is so understanding. Can’t wait for the next update!
    September 15th, 2019 at 07:01pm
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    Yup, go explain yourself Gerard, should have done it a while ago. Can’t wait for the next one!
    September 14th, 2019 at 08:54pm
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    Ugh. I mean, I get it. I completely understand why her family and friends are being a pain - because if it was my sister or friend I would be just as angry. But she isn't stupid for staying, not when he so obviously loves her and hates what he did - not when she is being smart about it and not pretending like it didn't happen. She's so strong for staying - definitely stronger than if she would've have just left. It takes a certain kind of strength to stay after something like that. I hope they start to understand soon.

    Loved the update! I can't wait for the next one!
    September 13th, 2019 at 09:11pm
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    YES GERARD, YES!
    September 12th, 2019 at 09:10pm
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    Sad oh no
    September 11th, 2019 at 10:26pm
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    Yes, yes, yes, yes! Cannot wait until the next update!
    September 8th, 2019 at 12:30am
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    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    September 6th, 2019 at 09:12pm
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    ooooooo !!!!! They are so cute together, even if it's hella awkward right now. I really hope they work it out and that they TALK. They need to talk about what happened and they need to talk about what they want for the future. And they definitely need to talk about the fact that Olivia isn't going to marry him in 6 months. LOVED IT! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE
    September 5th, 2019 at 09:17pm
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    Ugh Melissa. Please update soon!
    September 4th, 2019 at 08:15pm
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    And the flood gates open! Hopefully this is a turning point for them. He knows that Olivia needs more emotion from him, and now she knows that he is actually feeling something other than calmness about the whole thing. Loved the update! Can’t wait for the next one
    September 2nd, 2019 at 09:28pm
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    There we go ahahaha some emotion from the asshat! I'm getting more and more excited (: can't wait for the next update!
    August 31st, 2019 at 06:33pm
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    Ugh, I don't know why but he is just falling so flat to me. Maybe cuz he isn't begging and thats what I want him to do? He is seeming so nonchalant and I really wanna be petty and have Olivia go on a date with someone else. Please update soon!
    August 30th, 2019 at 10:18pm
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    Oooo I want him to sweat. Good Leo for treating it like a serious matter. Can’t wait for the next update
    August 27th, 2019 at 08:56pm
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    Re-read it, and it doesn’t really seem to me that Gerald is all that sorry. I mean, he’s about to lose the girl he was gonna get married too, the girl he built a life with for four years and he seems just.... calm about it all. Idk. Can’t wait to read more!
    August 27th, 2019 at 01:46am
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    I’m so glad I checked to see if you were still writing. With the Mibba issues, I’ve been going crazy without anything to read.

    I love this so far! I can’t wait to read more of it. Please update soon!
    August 26th, 2019 at 10:01pm