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  • Twisted;;Symphony

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    And I am back to not feeling sorry for him. Good god. He was going to break up with her. Like, I was on board when he just made the mistake - when he didn't doubt her or them, but now? He wanted to break up with her, and now they are (are they?) broken up. He got what he wanted. He cannot convince me that the kiss didn't mean anything anymore. It was a kiss after flirting and a promise of some kind of relationship. THAT MEANS SOMETHING! THAT'S THE SAME THING AS MELISSA WANTING TO LEAVE ENZO FOR HER COWORKER. If I was Olivia, I wouldn't have reassured him that she didn't throw the ring back at him. He doesn't deserve any kind of comfort right now.

    "You could just talk to me." Fuck off, Gerard. Like you talked to her? What a joke.

    I wanna be petty and I want Olivia to meet someone while she is visiting her aunt and uncle. Someone handsome and kind and won't fuck things up for her. And then Gerard can feel that same pain that she is feeling.

    And poor Lana (I mean kind of - she still should have waited to kiss him until he actually broke up with his "bitchy girlfriend", but still). She thought she met a (to her) good guy and that they were going to start something, just to be humiliated in front of her friends.

    Sorry - you have me heated lol. Just a testament to how great your storytelling is and how much I love everything you write.
    September 26th, 2019 at 08:18pm
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    My heart is literally breaking. Oh no. And I think I know what’s going to happen since I know I’ve really all of your stories - poor Olivia.

    And what the fuck Gerard. Why wouldn’t you just tell her anything you had said in the beginning? Like, did you think it wouldn’t come out? Like you didn’t think the kiss would come out? And if you knew she was friends with someone on the team, then wtf?

    Ugh. I am just.... speechless.
    September 25th, 2019 at 09:44pm
  • Jayme112234

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    What was Lana expecting??? That he'd welcome her with open arms when he's shown up with Olivia. Whoever's friend she is, must have known that Gerard was bringing Olivia and it wouldn't be a good idea that Lana attend.

    My heart is breaking right now. I get Olivia's upset and what Gerard did was stupid but if they can't move forward then maybe its best if they just break up

    Can only imagine what people will be thinking now she's actually took off the ring. Melissa will have a field day that is for sure
    September 25th, 2019 at 09:39pm
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    Oh shit... no...

    I knew it would happen sooner or later but was not ready for it to be like that.
    September 25th, 2019 at 04:57pm
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    What.the.fuck. No no no no no you can’t do that and then make us wait a day!!

    Holy shit, I’m shaking. Oh no. I knew this was going to happen, I just didn’t think it would be this bad! Wtf Gerard - she better be freaking lying. She better be bitter - oh shit. You just lost her. Like, why wouldn’t he tell her that he had said that?! Even if it was in anger?! Didn’t he learn his mistake from the last time?! Jesus Christ. Ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    2 updates today? Cuz I can’t survive
    September 24th, 2019 at 08:20pm
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    Yay Enzo! That’s exactly what she needed. Ugh, Melissa really needs to back off. They are so good together - Olivia and Gerard. I just hope they continue to grow with one another
    September 23rd, 2019 at 09:26pm
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    Glad that Enzo and Olivia talked. He had some great advice and he's right, Melissa is overcompensating and sooner or later that's gonna bite her in the ass
    September 23rd, 2019 at 09:20pm
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    @ Twisted;;Symphony Completely agree. What Melissa did was so much worse than the kiss, hers meant something to her and now she's all for nailing Gerard to a cross. If it weren't for the fact she got pregnant I don't think Enzo would have taken her back

    I think Enzo would be a good sounding board for Olivia. He's been where she has and I'm sure a lot of people had something to say about his decision to take Melissa back. Though if its an unspoken thing I would love for it to come out and them have to deal with their family like Olivia had to
    September 22nd, 2019 at 06:34pm
  • Twisted;;Symphony

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    What Melissa did was so much worse than what Gerard did!!! At least that was just a kiss - one that obviously didn’t mean anything to him. Hers actually meant something.

    Olivia is finally feeling like herself - and there’s a possibility that they could be even better than before. It would be great if Enzo stepped in to help her out.

    Can’t wait for the next update!
    September 22nd, 2019 at 06:30pm
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    Love the story so far. Melissa is really starting to bother me, she's like a dog with a bone not giving an inch
    September 22nd, 2019 at 03:14am
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    !!!!!!! Oh my gosh!!!! Progress!
    September 21st, 2019 at 07:53pm
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    "He hadn’t realised how much he’d loved hearing her laugh until she had stopped"
    OH MY GOD, THIS WAS SO FUCKING CUTE!!! I literally got butterflies when I read this!

    Oh, I hope Paris is everything he is hoping for. They really are so cute together.

    ugh, Melissa. I just don't understand her. I mean, it's your sister. And yeah, it's your sister, but apparently, according to your papa, you should be a little more understanding. Ooo I wanna hear that story.
    September 20th, 2019 at 08:35pm
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    oh oh oh - this is when the girl pops up, huh? They are getting better and becoming more comfortable around one another, so now something has to fuck it all up. UGH
    I love how his family loves her though. It was nice to read about at least someone supporting Oliva and Gerard and whatever decision they come to about their relationship.
    September 19th, 2019 at 07:39pm
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    oh shot. I didn't even think about that kind of self-doubt that she would feel - oh no. He has a lot of making up to do.
    September 18th, 2019 at 04:22am
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    *fangirl squeal* they are so CUTE!
    September 16th, 2019 at 08:38pm
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    BREAK?! What break?! Ooo I want details! Especially if it’s gonna shine a light on why Melissa is so angry and why Enzo is so understanding. Can’t wait for the next update!
    September 15th, 2019 at 07:01pm
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    Yup, go explain yourself Gerard, should have done it a while ago. Can’t wait for the next one!
    September 14th, 2019 at 08:54pm
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    Ugh. I mean, I get it. I completely understand why her family and friends are being a pain - because if it was my sister or friend I would be just as angry. But she isn't stupid for staying, not when he so obviously loves her and hates what he did - not when she is being smart about it and not pretending like it didn't happen. She's so strong for staying - definitely stronger than if she would've have just left. It takes a certain kind of strength to stay after something like that. I hope they start to understand soon.

    Loved the update! I can't wait for the next one!
    September 13th, 2019 at 09:11pm
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    YES GERARD, YES!
    September 12th, 2019 at 09:10pm
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    Sad oh no
    September 11th, 2019 at 10:26pm