Return Of The Knife Master - Comments

@ PhenoBarbiDoll
Thank you so much! I have the second and third chapters done, but I wrote them together, as one chapter. Obviously we don't need an almost 5,000 word chapter, so I'm going to split it into two, but I honestly don't know where to do it at. Literally every single question Jimmy tries to answer brings up another question, or six!

I really only wanted the one chapter with Brian, then I was going to move on to another, or just cut to where all the guys end up in a room with Jimmy when the mayhem starts. But it's not going that way. The paradox of hilarity I'm going for has opened up and this is ending up with pretty much all of the same questions I would have if I was Brian. LOL I'm stuck in this whole black hole myself!! I might need to call on you to help my own sanity here

That would pretty much be my reaction as well "Why are you shouting?" - "Why AREN'T YOU shouting?" I laughed out loud. I can literally hear Jimmy calmly replying to Brian's borderline hysteria.

Interesting concept. I'm ready for it!

@ zach myers;
Thank you! I will say, it will probably seem a bit weird/awkward for the first couple chapters, but hilarity will ensue! I just finished writing the second chapter. I hope to have it edited and put up in the next day or two. It is a pretty long one! Close to 3,000 words. Trying to figure out if I want to make it into two parts, or just leave it as is.

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