June 19th, 2010 at 05:52pm
:cheese: EMILY.
WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME YOU WRITE SO SUPER AMAZINGLY?! :grr:
kso, this isn't a story I'd usually read 'cause it's about dancing and stuff. But I was just snooping around Meebs and I stumbled across this story and figured I'd give it a go 'cause you've been terribly kind and reviewed my story. And I found that I really like it! :brightside:
I like the description, and how it's split by the girl dancing. It's just lovely the way you've written it. :tehe: ...And I'm such a dodgy reviewer.
And so her mother danced the world and her father monopolised the planet, art and business coming together in one charming relationship, where both could manipulate and neither could win.
I really like that sentence. Just..I don't know how to describe why I like it. But it's good, and I like how you've used the words "world" and "planet" to mean the same thing..but different. :shifty Like, they mean the same thing but each word expresses a different concept of that meaning. ..If that makes sense. :shifty
Anyhoo, GOOD JOB. KEEP IT UP! ~~
That's all I have to say. :)