I was looking down your list of stories for that AFI fic, but I stopped to read this one. Wow. You've done an amazing job leaving all the right parts unsaid. I loved how she actually asked outloud why it couldn't have been Gerard. You seemed to capture the denail of the loss of a loved one just flawlessly. And one thing I really liked was that you never used any of their names. It just added some kind of personal touch, it made your characters just that much easier to relate to. So yeah, I liked it a LOT.
September 20th, 2007 at 11:47pm