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  • alexander bernadotte

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    This is a truly nicely written story, but it sort of turned me off that it didn't have a layout. I'm a bit of a loser when it comes to layouts, but anyways... Jessica totally made me laugh, especially when you described her in dressed in nothing more than a micro mini skirt, a boob tube and black hooker boots. I can imagine a few people I know in that getup, hahah!
    Anyways, this was very good (: Great job!
    December 6th, 2010 at 07:02am
  • Little

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    ^ I know! But I'll be updating more regularly from now on. Thanks so much for continuing to read Lost Rivals, it means so much to me. You guys are the best readers ever xoxo
    December 12th, 2009 at 03:01am
  • Slappy

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    ...I seemed to gasp a lot in my comments..

    I'm going to continue.

    GASP.
    YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED IN SO LONG D:
    December 11th, 2009 at 10:32pm
  • perksofbeinggatsby

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    good story, Update soon?
    December 11th, 2009 at 05:59pm
  • Little

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    australianidiot91:
    ooooooooooooohhhi like more please LOL i have a few friends that like this story too and we are all anticipated to see what happens next
    =]
    Thank's so much for sticking with the story, there will be more to come soon I promise! I've just been suffering from major writer's block! xox
    October 16th, 2008 at 09:38am
  • Little

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    australianidiot91:
    ooooooooooooohhhi like more please LOL i have a few friends that like this story too and we are all anticipated to see what happens next
    =]
    Thank's so much for sticking with the story, there will be more to come soon I promise! I've just been suffereing from major writer's block! xox
    October 16th, 2008 at 09:38am
  • australianidiot91

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    ooooooooooooohhhi like more please LOL i have a few friends that like this story too and we are all anticipated to see what happens next
    =]
    March 17th, 2008 at 10:04am
  • IdiotDorkGeek

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    ooohh!! cant wait to find out what happens !!
    November 3rd, 2007 at 10:13pm
  • TeaCakeLady

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    Wow.
    Her emotions that are portrayed in this story are great, seeing into tiny bits of her 'past-life' gives the reader a really great understanding of what your trying to say, it's awesome.
    :] I loved it.
    more soon ?
    November 3rd, 2007 at 03:14pm
  • Slappy

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    Glee.
    X]
    November 3rd, 2007 at 09:17am
  • Slappy

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    Awww.
    *draws smiley faces on the pillows*
    October 2nd, 2007 at 03:52am
  • Whatshername13

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    Please Update soon :) The last chapter was so good! Poor Tillie
    September 19th, 2007 at 06:58am
  • Slappy

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    Poor Tillie...
    September 8th, 2007 at 10:48pm
  • Husky

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    poor tilly!!!
    September 8th, 2007 at 08:16pm
  • Little

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    Yay, thanks for the comments there will be more to come soon. =]
    August 16th, 2007 at 07:46pm
  • Slappy

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    Gasp.
    August 15th, 2007 at 06:43am
  • Jamie Glynn;

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    more!!!!
    July 7th, 2007 at 04:41pm
  • Husky

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    NOOOOOOOO
    July 7th, 2007 at 03:32pm
  • SammixRocketship

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    yay!!!

    pm me when theres more!!
    June 22nd, 2007 at 03:26pm
  • Little

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    ^ You'll find out... :p =]]
    June 22nd, 2007 at 02:09pm
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