Unbound: The Wild Ride - Comments

ughhh Brian suxxx I'm team Matt >.>
:D
i effin love this series eeeeeeep!
i think ive read the first 2 in like a week...
IM HOOKED!
ur an awesome writer; keep writing:DD

This was indeed a wild ride, with all those ups and downs, but you know I loved all the drama and the not drama and don’t we forget the many funny scenes you put in between to lighten up the mood…loved it!

I cannot understand Olivia though…she let Johnny sleep in the same house, room and even bed? Johnny could have slept on the streets for all that I care…

And I cannot understand that she just gives in that easily…Johnny didn’t even have to fight for her…I mean she came to him…but when I think about it, it does fit her…she always took what she wanted and she’s a very strong woman who knows what she wants…and I do respect her for that…and I don’t think she’s letting Johnny get away that easy.

I’m glad that Bekah didn’t have a fit, although she knows something is wrong and that she stays at the cabin with Matt…it will do her good.

What else can I say…I really enjoyed the story…you kept me highly entertained with all those twists and turns and I can’t wait for the sequel!!!

Loved it <333

Awww!
That's actually all I can say about the millions of updates I've just spent an hour reading.
Yep. That long.

*subscribes to new story*

That ending was awesome..
I know Johnny deserves EVERYTHING Liv's giving him but I couldn't help but feel a little sad for him when I read the last line =[

I could never imagine Johnny Christ crying, I don't know why but I can't but if this really did happen I think everyone would know he'd be crying like a big ass baby!

I can't wait for the next sequel! I'm gonna subscribes straight away! =D

Ok; I wrote this out last night as my internet collapsed. It covers quite some space, and my handwriting ain't that big. Sit tight, grab something to eat and drink...or just piss off and do something more exciting with your life....
I know Johnny's an ass and what he did was so unbelievably wrong and cruel to Liv, Taylor and their relationship, but I can't help feeling sorry for him.
I don't think he'd lie about knowing (or not) about what was happening. I reckon he really didn't know and he really is heart broken. It's not just that he got caught. Johnny's one of those people that do stupid things and then get pissed off at themselves. He knows he's fucked up with everything he ever wanted; he doesn't need to be told to go to hell - he's already there.
I can see Olivia's point of view, and I totally agree with her decision. It's good for Taylor and The UnBorn, herself and Johnny. But that's not just it; it's the best way of getting back at Johnny and getting revenge. I'm sure that's part of Liv's decision making process; it sure as hell would be part of mine!
Staying married doesn't give Johnny much chance of re - wooing his dearly beloved, which is obviously what he's trying to do with the sand thing and the rose. I shouldn't think Liv will go for relationship counselling; she's too proud - even if it probably is necessary. Staying married is filling at least to quotas; revenge and the general well being of their family.
I hope so much that Liv's hardened heart will crack under Johnny's attempts at seeking forgiveness and proving his sorrow. Although their tour will fuck everything up that Johnny's tried to build. I can see Matt entering into the argument, once Bekah's got it out of Liv, with guns blazing and the lead wellies on. Revenge on Johnny's snarky comments about Matt and Bekah in Strength Of The World. I can see Johnny with a vast array of rather beautiful bruises; physical and emotional. IV won't be pretty will it?
The episode certainly has been Unbound: The Wild Ride. Most people have grown up; acting ages not shoe sizes. We've been to hell back as a group and individually. And there have been times where you've ripped stable ground out from under us with the Twisted Sisters, especially. On the maturity stakes, Brian get's that prize; he's really grown up. Having been to hell and back at least twice in this story alone.
We've seen some remarkable strength too; mainly from Bekah (and her relationsjop to Matt). The Twisted Sisters won't break them apart if love is melding them together. I should think a determind Bekah is a tank. Nothing can stop her. We've seen strength and love - conquers - all from Tracey and Zack now I think about it. They're impulse marriage could have gone all to pot when Tracey didn't tell Zack about her cancer. Sure, they'd have continued on as a married couple, but they would purely have been hiding the chinks from the outer world. But they pulled threw it and as such, are a much stronger, wiser couple.
I don't know how your mind comes up with plit lines like these; and how you can come up with people as conniving and amoral as the Twisted Sisters. Or how you keep track of all that happens in ten inter - connected, but seperately twisting lives.
I always was a Team Gates girl; I made sure to wear purple and blazon it about...but we should all have been Team Bekah, really. Whatever made her happy (Matt).
However wild this ride has been, (if it had been a real ride at Alton Towers we'd have hit Mach III and suffered GVII in the corners!) I'm sure it's been a ride about love, honesty, strength (inner strength not muscular strength) and friendship.
Four things every person, every couple, every friendship group and every family needs. Four things certian people don't have (The Twisted Sisters), and four things that Johnny and Liv will need an enormous amount of to survive. These four things form happiness; without them you can't get true happiness.
Good luck with the next one, I can't wait! I hope the ride, if a little more grounded is just as captivating and rewarding as the last three. Remember to please yourself with the chapters first and foremost. The wait will add to the suspense and rabid reading that will follow.
You're an amazing author, these stories do you justice and so much more. I may have disliked it in the beginning as you shook my preconceptions out the window, but it was more than worth it!!
Ok, the italics were the bits I wrote last night at about 22.00 hours. And the normal bits the stuff I added in today, as I was typing it up. I hope I didn't bore you to tears too much with my rambles and bullshit; but that's all stuff that the last chapter evoked from me.

Great ending!!! I can't wait for Thick and Thin and will subscribe from chapter 1 =)

Awh!

-hugs Johnny, then punches him-

You better not fuck anything else up, Johnny Seward!

The last line was like, so powerful, and so saddening.

I don't think in any of the stories, that Johnny has ever cried, except maybe when Taylor was born, although I'll have to check...

anyways, yeah.

I can't wait for the sequel!!!!!

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you know i've loved it, Tash - a bright spot in my otherwise terrible life at the moment.

You cannot make Liv and Johnny break up!

I will cry!

Jesus Johnny!

No more alcohol for you!

Awwwww!!!!!

Matekah is officially one of my new fave couples, the number one slot occupied by Johvia, although if Johnny keeps fucking up, there won't be a Johvia.

No!

Please don't make them break up!!!!!!

More soonish, Tashy?

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This story is coming to an end…this is sooo scarry to think about…how many chapters are still left?

I knew you would bring back the drama…but Johnny? I totally did not expect that…you totally caught me off guard…

I really can’t believe that…first: why did he get so drunk again?...and second: who can I blame for the fuck up???

Damn and now Olivia has to deal with it on her own? Good that she at least told Bekah not to call her…because otherwise Olivia would spill and as far as we got to know Bekah, she probably cut her honey moon short to be with her best friend and support her…what a mess!

Johnny lost his wedding band also? Is that some sign…for the end of the relationship between Johnny and Olivia? I remember Oliva saying in the beginning that they’ll just try for a year…to stay married…did Johnny think it’s off now??? :shock: What a jerk…

Jimmy turning into Matt? Never!!! Brian you’re outta mind…

Matt and Bekah are going to spend their honey moon in Big Bear? How fitting…I just hope they’ll get the time alone that they deserve…

Loved the update…more soonish?

Either she's good at sewing or her underwear bill is huge!! No, I'm glad that they're happy and that both of them appreciate decently scandalous underwear. It nearly made me cringe when my mates told me they never thought of wearing lace...or thongs. *sighs* all those cheapo birthday/christmas present from la senza out the window.
Anyways...WHAT THE FUCK IS JOHNNY DOING?! WHY THE FUCK DID HE DO THAT?! I know that Olivia is a pain in the ass to live with, because she's opinionated, bitchy, sarcastic, independent and a loud mouth. But still. That wasn't necessary and it was a truly stupid thing to do. Olivia hadn't even looked at another man...and you still think with your dick. I know that a man's brain is situated between 2 testes and his penis, but that was sheer stupidity even then! You chose to be married to her, so you have to live with it. You helped get her pregnant, now live with it. It's called actions and consequences. Every action has a consequence. That action was stupid, and it has a horrid consquence. Good luck, fucker.
I can see Olivia staying with him and making them get marriage counselling. Just to spite him. And because she loves him. I bet she goes on tour with him. hahahaha.
More soon?

Off the cliff with Johnny!

That is all.

omg what did johnny do???? liv is going to kill him, i'm sure of it! please don't let liv kill him!

What the fuck did Johnny do?! You would think that he would know better seeing as his wife is preggo and hormonal. Looks like someone's gonna be in a loooot of trouble! good...he deserves it.

What's Johnny done? He's been the perfect, forgiving husband so far and I'd hate for him to fuck it all up now. Especially as Liv's preggers. We all know that she's been pushing him away and blowing cold cold cold on him, when all he wants is to support her. And she's bitching him out at every chance, but that's half of marriage.
Liv does need to lighten up, and remember that it takes 2 to make a baby. Unless your Val. But that's just freaky. As in, really freaky. And so not nice. *shudders*
More soon??

OMFG!!!!
i can't believe johnny cheated on his pregnant wife!!!!!!
poor Olivia!

I don't even want to think about what Johnny did to cause more drama for this poor group. But the reception was fun!!! (Speaking as a voyer.) I wanted to be there, damnit! Haha. You know, you should really get something published, I think you'd do very well. = )

Ooooooh! Johnny did something vewy vewy bwad....hehe- HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D xD :P :)

What the fuck did Johnny do now?

I loved it Tashy!

More soonish?

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An awesome update!!

I think nearly everyone reading had atleast a tiny thought at the back of their head that she wouldn't do it.. But she went through with it! Yeay!

It was an awesome wedding and the quotes on the rings are amazing. I loved it!