Two Hearts to Make a Maniac - Comments

  • Madamoiselle.

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    Why are you stopping? Aw... now what am I going to read? lol I'm just joking! Well, I do hope you get some ideas from the movie... it's great! The story's amazing like always!
    July 23rd, 2008 at 03:45am
  • your hand in mine

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    This story, my dear, is delicious. You really need to go see the Dark Knight, in IMAX preferably. I regret not seeing it there first, but I'm just going back to see it there anyways, ha. I like how you're including characters from different series, even though I see the Heath Ledger Joker in my mind's eye. Continue soon, I am waiting with bated breath.
    July 23rd, 2008 at 02:28am
  • Caravaggio

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    Another great chapter!

    Can't wait for more!

    Love Sheen
    July 23rd, 2008 at 12:05am
  • lililovegood

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    Loved the update!
    But I don't want Harley to leeeeave!
    I'm gonna be so upset. :[
    Lol.
    July 22nd, 2008 at 11:58pm
  • Caravaggio

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    Another great chapter. And, I think your version of the Joker is pretty spot on, even if you haven't seen the movie. ^_^

    Can't wait for more (but take your time XP)

    Love Sheen
    July 22nd, 2008 at 07:24pm
  • Madamoiselle.

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    i think you are geting the right persona for the Joker, even though you haven't seen it! I think it's really good so far!
    July 22nd, 2008 at 03:49pm
  • Gunslingerrr

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    I love it.
    I really do.
    Keep it up.
    You could use more details as to her surroundings, though.
    =]
    July 22nd, 2008 at 09:03am
  • kurdt cobain.

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    thish ish really good.
    :D

    *subscribsh*
    July 22nd, 2008 at 08:00am
  • lovestruckfool

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    ahhh mai garsh
    screamgasm
    im pretty much in love right nowwwwwww :]
    July 22nd, 2008 at 02:54am
  • Madamoiselle.

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    man... that was amazing! I loved the graphics! lol <3 Keep it up!
    July 22nd, 2008 at 02:45am
  • TheFaultyStar

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    Wow! I can only say one thing. Next chapter please!!!! This is absoloutly brilliant, you have to hurry and right the next chapter. I don't think I have ever enjoyed a story as much. YOU HAVE TO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!
    July 22nd, 2008 at 12:39am
  • lililovegood

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    Niiiice update!
    That was a total screamgasm. lol
    July 22nd, 2008 at 12:08am
  • Caravaggio

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    I really like that you didn't make her a good guy that gets turned evil by the Joker for some reason that's never explained. ^_^ That's what it usually is. But, in your story she was already kind of evil. It's a nice angle to work. Make the audience fall in love with the wrong side, right?

    Can't wait for more.

    Love Sheen
    July 21st, 2008 at 11:37pm
  • Madamoiselle.

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    wow this is really good! I hope you put out more! [subscribes]
    July 21st, 2008 at 09:55pm
  • poisenXivyX

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    i love it
    i seriously do
    more soon???
    July 21st, 2008 at 09:43pm
  • Caravaggio

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    Wow. You're really whipping these out! Can't wait for more!

    Love Sheen
    July 21st, 2008 at 07:49pm
  • Caravaggio

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    Woo! Another good chapter! Can't wait for more!

    Hundreds of other people should really be commenting this! It's good!

    Love Sheen
    July 21st, 2008 at 05:54pm
  • lililovegood

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    Oh snap!
    Keep it movin', babe! :]]
    July 21st, 2008 at 08:48am
  • lovestruckfool

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    I must say, i'm going through quite a phase of Joker obession as well...
    but this is one of the best stories that i've read so far!
    keep it up plz!!!!!!
    July 21st, 2008 at 05:32am
  • Caravaggio

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    Woah! This is really good! I mean, usually I find Batman stories (or the like) and they're all cheesy. Because, quiet frankly, even with how awesome it is, Batman is kind of cheesy in itself.

    But I really like this! Please update soon!

    Love Sheen
    July 21st, 2008 at 12:53am