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  • RachelTorres

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    Wow. Anyone who has said it before is completely, one hundred percent correct. You are a brilliant writer. Very, very talented.
    This story was a complete joy to read. The imagery you used was perfect, and your word choice is great as well.
    The thing that I like most about this story, and your writing style is that even though there is so much description, you really don't end up tripping over it. The way you write it, it all seems very clear and the description doesn't swallow the story.
    Excellent. I'm glad I got the opportunity to read this.
    xoxo
    June 3rd, 2007 at 04:28am
  • astroz0mbie

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    I don't know yet..
    I made an account just because I like arts..
    I posted some stories just for the sake of it, so I didn't look stupid..
    But I think that's the only thing I'll be posting. Stories.
    If I had a nice professional camera, I would so be posting some other stuff.
    June 2nd, 2007 at 06:38pm
  • The Way

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    I might start a crusade to get people to read your stories more. I'm just thinking of a way to do it... Yeah, sorry, this isn't a review, but... I wanna let you know.

    A Melacholy Autumn = AMAZING. :D

    Btw, are you gonna post artwork on deviantart, or just writing? I checked you out (not like THAT) and it was stuff you already got here. Just asking. Dance
    June 2nd, 2007 at 10:58am
  • astroz0mbie

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    omigod, guys.
    thank you all so much.
    I really don't know how to thank you enough.
    June 1st, 2007 at 09:33pm
  • Heart Attack Machine

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    I envy you. You are such a great writer and I can't say anything that hasn't already been said. I'm at a loss for words...it was so....beautifully written...it's just...wow...
    June 1st, 2007 at 09:22pm
  • astroz0mbie

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    no! don't give up writing!
    it's the closest thing to paradise. In Love
    thank you dear. that means alot to me.
    June 1st, 2007 at 08:43pm
  • Fish Camp

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    I completely give up writing.

    Why should I when you're here? Your like--yeah, you're fucking amazing.
    June 1st, 2007 at 06:48pm
  • astroz0mbie

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    O_O
    Wow. Thank you so much..
    Really. I wasn't expecting that.
    I really don't know how to to thank you.
    In Love
    May 31st, 2007 at 05:21pm
  • The Way

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    For Reasons Unknown

    Oh. My. Gee.

    That was utterly, utterly gorgeous. I know I keep saying I love all your stuff, but this... this COMPLETELY blew me away. At the beginning paragraph, my eyes widened at the beautiful use of words, of imagery... almost made me want to wish that I wrote it. The description was so lovely and off-the-charts, I would have read it even if the plot sucked.

    But it didn't. I absolutely love how you described the withering marriage. I'd quote my favorite sentences, but I friggin' loved every single one. I can't say anything more, or I'll be redundant.

    I think you've completely topped yourself with this. You're not reaching your peak; you're already there. I'm just wary of how amazing you'll be when you get older. This can easily wipe the floor with many chaptered fics here. Seriously.

    I am your no. 1 fan. Teehee. I'm gonna copy-paste your fics to notepad now, so I can read them all offline and comment later.

    Gosh, I'm still in a daze...
    May 31st, 2007 at 09:41am
  • Heartstrings.

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    For Rasons Unknown

    I have to say, you're only 14 and you write with such amazing grace. Everything flows. It was like heaven to read. Your description brought everything to life. There is so much potential in it. I am amazed. It was a joy to read every single sentence.

    Those publishers can't wait till your 18!

    XoXo
    Emmy
    May 31st, 2007 at 05:56am
  • Banach95

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    That oneshot is amazing Jess... you are too talented for your own good :)
    May 31st, 2007 at 04:32am
  • astroz0mbie

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    New add-on

    Sweet Skin
    May 13th, 2007 at 06:01am
  • astroz0mbie

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    New add-on.

    Come Away With Me
    May 12th, 2007 at 06:17am
  • astroz0mbie

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    Yes, I'm sure. ;)
    April 30th, 2007 at 05:22am
  • Jolly McJollyson

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    You are incredible. A little grammatical slippage here and there, grammatical slippage that looks more like error than artistry, but good God. Good GOD. Are you SURE you're only 14???
    April 29th, 2007 at 09:47pm