The Fall - Comments

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Love this story: characters, pov, plot.

Write more.
Now. >:U

This story is addicting... :D

still love it <3

It's so interesting! I really want to know what happens..keep going!!!!

I want to know what happens post-bomb and everything =]

... and if Charlie can last without killing the other two. I hope he does =S

I REALLY like this.
All of your writing is great.
The other story you have like this, 788, I like too. I wish you'd keep writing on them, because they're both really, really good.

Charlie creeps me out. And I want to know more about Winona's Dad. Why their bombing the island and stuff. It's interesting.

Sorry I haven't commented in awhile...so Wynonna's dad acutally gives does he? I'm curious as to why he's planning on blowing the island up!
Agh, update when you can even though its been like...two months.

This is getting more and more exciting by the chapter - I can hardly stand it!

-shifty eyes- Uhh... I mean, update soon?

Awesome. Love it. More soon?

please
update soon
I am positivley addicted to this and I continue to reread it over and over.
more chapters would make my day so much!!
C:

i really like it!
it's so different that it just pulls you in!

that part with Charlie licking the blood off Michael's lip made me squeal and read over it about ten more times.
fan-fucking-tastic!!

I just started reading and I love it!!!

uhh i like this story so far though it is kinda confusing. but i still like, i'm new to it and i think its interesting espacially wiona!!!
anyway i hope you update soon love!!!!!

I won't stop loving it! You can't make me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And i won't stop loving Charlie either!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

McNuggets! Ahh I remember the days where I used to eat those like they were drugs. Now I don't because I'm to afraid of whats in them.

mcnuggets in the future?
thank god.

I'm commenting! and I still love it!

I swear I've commented already at some point... probably on your profile then...

I love the contrast between the three characters, the character's personalities... and what's up with Winona?

What is Charlies beef on cats? I mean my god they arent THAT bad.
Sorry, anyways you haven't updated it in awhile but this was a good update.

~Layla

This story is great. Very unique, I must say. I'm eager to learn about everyone's pasts. That would be fun. Good job!

I'm a little confused about Winona's character. She seems innocent, and nice, but I don't know if I should really say that because she hasn't really talked to others in this story. I wonder if she left her father without him knowing? Because if he listened to her - about blowing up the island - then he must care about her. As for Charlie, he's a sweetheart but also a devil. I really want to know more about his past. Michael is obsessed with money; I can see that. I wonder what made him that way.

Great update. Loved it. More when you can, please.