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Charlie died, and I found this on her laptop. I think she wanted you to have it.

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(TIME HAS PASSED AND CHARLIE HAS BEEN TAKEN TO THE HOSPITAL. IM SORRY FOR TELLING YOU THAT GERARD RAN ALL THE WAY TO NEW YORK FROM NEW JERSEY BECAUE I have EEEN INFORMED THIS IS NOT WRIGHT IN TIMES AS IT WOULD HAV TAKEN HIM AGES. HE TOOK A BIKECYCLE. THAT WOULD BE QUICKER)

sam had been informed of Charlie in hospital and was sitting in the big white hopsital room which was so big and white in reminded her of Charles. Charles had died in a hopsital very similar to this as hosptials all look very the same. He died of a drug fulled bender and had to be taken to hospital. This made sam cry as she thought this is what might happen to Charlie now as she lay in a hospital bed with tubes over every inch of her body.
Gerard came in crying tears of frustration and sadness “whats wrong?” Sam asked. “Are yo o.k.”
“OF COURSE IM NOT OK YOU STUPID STUPID WOMAN. MY GIRLFRIEND IS DYING AND THERE IS NOTHING I CAN DO ABOUT IT. IM GOING TO TAKE ALL MY MEDICASION AGAIN AND OVERDOES BECAUSE NOTHING IS WORTH LIVING IF I DONT HAVE CHARLIE IN MY LIFE I NEED HER.”
Sam stood up, took Gerards pain pills out of his hand and threw them across the room. Her beautiful face contrwisted into an expression that could only be described as anger and sadness and pain all rolled into the same. She shouted “HOW DARE YOU. YOU CANNOT RELAPS MY HUSBAND DID THAT AND I AM SAD EVERY DAY THAT HE IS NOT WITH ME. You need to carry on and make your music. Thats why I bought the band to America to keep Charles music with me wherever I go so I can play the bass and think of him. You need to keep up with your talent because that matters and that is what will drive you through this tough time. Gerard sat and let out a single tear that expressed every single emotion that he could possibly feel at that moment in time. He rembered all the times that him and charlie had together over the two weeks and sighed loudly. He wanted to here her voice again. He wanted to touch her silky pale skin. Run his hands up her toned tanned stomach and kiss her pale effvervescent lips. He tucked a strand of jet black hair behind his year and ringed his hands together in an angwished mannar. “Why do you have to leave me Charlie?” he found her A5 black notebook with swilly patterning, and read:
Turn away
If you could get me a drink
Of water cause my lips are chapped and faded
Call my Aunt Marie
Help her gather all my things
And bury me
In all my favorite colors,
My sisters and my brothers, still,
I will not kiss you,
Cause the hardest part of this,
Is leaving you.
[ Lyrics from: http://www.lyricsmode.com/lyrics/m/my_chemical_romance/cancer.html ]
Now turn away,
Cause I'm awful just to see
Cause all my hair's abandoned all my body,
All my agony,
Know that I will never marry,
He cired, for so long and so hard that he didnt realise that there were some hands came along and held onto his shoulders. Mikey squeesed onto him and knelt down onto the stone flooring of the room and looked onto his brothers deep dark eyes that were heavy with sadness and soul.
'I love her and she cant leave me'
'I know bro, but think of it this way. Shell always be with you, hear.'
Mikey placed his slender index finger againest Gee's heaving toned chest.
'your heart bro. Write songs for her. Feel her through your music. We can do this'
gerard looked into the room that was cold and dark which has charlie on wires and sighed. 'I will sing this song for her at juicy. I will sing all of her songs for her at juicy.'
mikey smiled. 'hey, at least we have an extra space in the van now for our instruments!'
They both laughed. Gerard was almost rolling the floor with laughter when he stood up straight suddenly and yelled
'MIKEY HOW DARE YOU BE SO INSENSITIVE THIS IS MY GIRLFRIEND. THE OVE OF MY LIFE AND SHE IS DYING'
the doctor walked in, with a pained expression. 'im so sorry'
before he could finish, gee dropped to the floor only this time not laughing. He raied his fists to the sky and screamed. He screamed so loudly that all the pigeons of the hosptial roof flew away in shock. He had never felt so ba din all his life he just wanted to take his pain pills to make all the pain go away from his body.

A MONTH LATER

on the stage in New York with dozens of screaming fans.
Gerard made his way to the mic and shouted across the screaming fans
'this song... is... for.... her. She knows. Not a moment goes by when I dont think of her and I want her to know that she didn't die in vain and she will live forever through our music and in our hearts.'
He then sang and they became one of the best bands in the world.

My Chemical Romance.

kwl threr should b more soon ppl :)

YAY! new chapter =D love it. write more soon =D =D =D

i love ur story its amazing but u made a little mistake when u were writing the lyrics its meant to be drop the dagger and lather the blood on ur hands romeo!

more on the way ppl

amazing, love it, keep writing!

sowrry didn't mean it honestly

I really like this story!!!! it's very good. oh and just to let you know...you spell new jersey like "new jersey" not "new jersy" and i'm from there, so DON'T LET IT HAPPEN AGAIN!!!! hahaha im just kidding. but really, this story is very very good. please write more soon!!

Thanks all of you. I'm glad you all like my storie. I know i'm repeating what i've said b fore. but i appriciate all of your comments. i've been a big fan of writting for as long as i can remember so thanks froe all you'r pro's and con's. (i'm gonna be chessy but truthful.) you're the one's that help me become better. :) Thank you so much.

Dramtic Plot! GREAT STORY!

i really like this story it's amazing. i love it. sure your skipping around a bit but it's still really good!

2". Chapter two, that song isn't Green Day's Warning. It's My Chemical Romance's Teenagers.

3. You are skipping around to much, everything is happening too fast. You talk about a smell in the kitchen then completely ignore it. Really, it needs alot of work."

Just to let you know point 2 i was listing to green day but writting teenagers by mcr the hole story kinda revolves on me writting mcr's songs.

I't my first storry on internet and i do appricate all comments k. I know a lot of ppl who have better grammer and spelling that me and english might notb thire 1st language but i aint done it for 2 years and i spent a lot and i mean a lot of my time speaking welsh. i don't really like english n e way but n e way keep reading more chapters on the way :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

hay that's my bro
thanks matt

i have read it and i think it is ok

Okay, since English isn't your first language I will forgive the pentiful spelling and grammar mistakes. But I honestly think you should proofread before you post- I know people whose first languages are Finnish or Japanese and write with perfect English grammar.

2. Chapter two, that song isn't Green Day's Warning. It's My Chemical Romance's Teenagers.

3. You are skipping around to much, everything is happening too fast. You talk about a smell in the kitchen then completely ignore it. Really, it needs alot of work.

Thanks guys glad to see ppl liking stuff i write. I promis to have less spelling mistakes (english aint my first languege.it's welsh) but i'm using word to check speeling so it should b ok now :) enjoy ;)

hi

i've only read up to chapter 3 but so far so good.

I loooove it. Please continue. For the life of me. OR I shall do something veeeerrrrryyyy bad. Few spelling mistakes and such but its still readable and still a good story. ^^,

Plz tell me if you like it :( plz

I hope you all like my story. :D Just to let you all know i do not wish i wrote mcr's songs i know that Gerards songs mean a lot to him and the rest of the band and i most surtantly don't wanna take that away from him.

but n e way enjoy :D :D :D