Death Reports - Comments, page 2

Josipa (3960)

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Bastard Son.:
I think I'm gonna love Matthew's Curse even more than I loved The Dance-floor. Seriously. It was an amazing, tense and intense start. Captured me from the very beginning. I love how you managed to portray Sean's inner struggle. And the weather basically reflected his mood, fears, whatnot... Then the sky cleared up and the tension somewhat dispersed, but it left him doubting himself.

I'm not making any sense, but I really loved the beginning of this series.
You made some typos, though. I'll hit myself with a shovel now.

I just updated it :tehe:

You make so much sense and I like it (: Thank you for every single word you put in your post. See, now I'm not making any sense.

And, please, feel free to point out my typos, please. So I can correct them :D

June 8th, 2007 at 12:01pm

Bastard Son. (200)

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I think I'm gonna love Matthew's Curse even more than I loved The Dance-floor. Seriously. It was an amazing, tense and intense start. Captured me from the very beginning. I love how you managed to portray Sean's inner struggle. And the weather basically reflected his mood, fears, whatnot... Then the sky cleared up and the tension somewhat dispersed, but it left him doubting himself.

I'm not making any sense, but I really loved the beginning of this series.
You made some typos, though. I'll hit myself with a shovel now.

June 8th, 2007 at 11:44am

Josipa (3960)

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I just wanted to apologize (: Erm, the chapter 8 is the beginning of a new case, the dancefloor murder has been solved so... The 8th chapter is actually a new beginning, 1st chapter of a new case. I also added one paragraph so... It's not long... It's on the beginning.

Thank you (:

June 4th, 2007 at 09:00am

Faith (100)

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Josipa:
Faith:
Oh, Mistress of suspense.
Zeus is laughing so hard (:

Thanks for perceiving me that way LOL

Oh my Zeus

, now I'll be like that blue hyper smiley. :shock: Wondering what's gonna happen, what's gonna happen...

June 2nd, 2007 at 01:28pm

Josipa (3960)

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Faith:
Oh, Mistress of suspense.

Zeus is laughing so hard (:

Thanks for perceiving me that way LOL

June 1st, 2007 at 01:33pm

Faith (100)

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Oh, Mistress of suspense.

June 1st, 2007 at 01:04pm

Josipa (3960)

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Kerplunk Girl:
*dies*
Gah! I have waited so long to read it.
And...I finally did. :tehe:
I can't wait for more.

*goes to read other story*

Glad to see you back, at least for an hour (: I'm glad you liked it (:

June 1st, 2007 at 09:48am

Kerplunk Girl (150)

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*dies*
Gah! I have waited so long to read it.
And...I finally did. :tehe:
I can't wait for more.

*goes to read other story*

June 1st, 2007 at 06:13am

Bastard Son. (200)

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Really looking forward to it. Smiley

May 19th, 2007 at 09:21pm

Josipa (3960)

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Hehe. I'm glad you loved it (: I'll update it in a few days. McNamara is down, I need to write something on a dead boy (:

May 19th, 2007 at 09:20pm

Bastard Son. (200)

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Oh, I loved it. And the lyrics were beautiful. And the whole scene at the precinct. Amazed yet again.
It paid off to become an icicle for a half an hour.

May 19th, 2007 at 09:18pm

Josipa (3960)

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Before any of you read the 7th chapter, I must say that I really liked it (:

Parts containing "shrewd guess" and "bite" are my favorites :file:

May 19th, 2007 at 09:12pm

Josipa (3960)

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Bastard Son.:
You weren't predictable. xD
And you can't stop now!
I got into it and all and then you go on and stop. Haha.
More will be added soon, hopefully... Will it?

The first paragraph made my smile a little, and the end made me claustrophobic.
There. I blame you for my mood-swings.

That was my intention (: Not mine, actually, Sean's :D

Yeah, more will be added soon, very soon (: I have to end this dancefloor murder (:

May 19th, 2007 at 12:51pm

Bastard Son. (200)

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You weren't predictable. xD
And you can't stop now!
I got into it and all and then you go on and stop. Haha.
More will be added soon, hopefully... Will it?

The first paragraph made me smile a little, and the end made me claustrophobic.
There. I blame you for my mood-swings.

May 19th, 2007 at 12:49pm

Josipa (3960)

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Bastard Son.:
I loved it. I'm predictable, I know. Now you've really got me on the edge of my seat y'know? It feels like the rope is getting tighter and tighter... Can't wait to read on finally find out who was the bastard.

I hope I'm not predictable (: It wouldn't be too good for the story (:

And it was really awesome to read your comment (:

May 14th, 2007 at 03:04pm

Bastard Son. (200)

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I loved it. I'm predictable, I know. Now you've really got me on the edge of my seat y'know? It feels like the rope is getting tighter and tighter... Can't wait to read on finally find out who was the bastard.

May 13th, 2007 at 08:26pm

Josipa (3960)

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Bastard Son.:
Ah, rly?

You, Banana-Split woman, yes, you! Update? -lip quiver-
I hate begging like this. But I miss it...

I will, probably tomorrow. Or maybe now. But it will be soon, sooner than you think (:

May 13th, 2007 at 05:42pm

Bastard Son. (200)

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Ah, rly?

You, Banana-Split woman, yes, you! Update? -lip quiver-
I hate begging like this. But I miss it...

May 13th, 2007 at 05:38pm

Josipa (3960)

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Bastard Son.:
Josipa:
played in stereo.:
Josipa:
Jolly McJollyson:
Also, nice signature. Aquabats = hilarious+the only ska/pop-punkish band I actually enjoy.
I thought people might be interested in a pool party at my house LOL
dujo in a bathing suit? ~~

:shifty: k sorry
We'd be in a pool house nearby. With the doors locked (:
:lmfao Sorry. That had to be done. :]

You'll be invited :D

May 12th, 2007 at 12:58pm

Bastard Son. (200)

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Josipa:
played in stereo.:
Josipa:
Jolly McJollyson:
Also, nice signature. Aquabats = hilarious+the only ska/pop-punkish band I actually enjoy.
I thought people might be interested in a pool party at my house LOL
dujo in a bathing suit? ~~

:shifty: k sorry
We'd be in a pool house nearby. With the doors locked (:

:lmfao Sorry. That had to be done. :]

May 12th, 2007 at 12:51pm