Dance Instructor - Comments

A-Amazing =D
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Shoobie:

Did you give this story up?

No, I've been way too busy for my liking. And exams are up too >.> I promise an update within the week.

Did you give this story up?

Sweet! New chapter!
Thanks for finally updating, it was really good. It was sad that she got rejected by Katy, but her and James were so cute.

This is great, keep it up!

xx

Ahaha, they're such teasers, I loved this chapter honey! Great job! =D too bad Katy pulled back from the dance, but hey, now she has more time for the MSI dance right? ^_^

I will update in this week.

Great chapter honey, sorry for the late review, things have been sort of hectic around here so yeah. I guess that covers it. Let's go on with my favorite parts yes?

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“…hey,” I hesitated.

“Listen-”

“No-

“But-

“I’m sorry!” we said in unison.

it's like they're reading each others minds through the computer..OMG MIND GAMES!

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“I don’t like him,” I whispered defiantly to myself, resting my head on my arms.

YES YOU DO!

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“Actually, Mark told me that you are very creative with your mind so…” she hesitated, smirking. “I’m leaving it to you.”

I gasped. “You’re giving me blank canvas? Oh, that’s so cool, thank you. Do you have a deadline for me?” I asked.

“Well, I’d like it before I hit my tour, so I can learn part of it too. Maybe around… three weeks or so? Does that work for you?” she asked. I racked my brains, thinking of my mindless dance. What could I say?

“It’s perfect!” I told her, smiling. She grinned.

“Cool.”

I can totally see her go nuts with the two dances together and mix them up ... XDDD I know that would happen to me, but hey, this is your story! Keep up the good work, the fact that you put Katy Perry in it makes us see that she is actually such a good dancer that she's famous in her own dancing way! Great job

Another good chapter, yo. :D
I almost forgot about this story! Anyways, it was good but I want a chapter with James in it too! lol
This is great, keep it up!

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“Did you like what you saw?” I asked, knowing there was two evident meanings.

“Very much so.”

OH BEHAVE!

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“Sure, sure. I see the way you two look at each other. Man, you guys crave each other like horny teenagers,” she snickered. I rolled my eyes.

“Stop talking about my, uh, ‘love life’ and let’s focus on yours. Steve wanted to ask you out.”

There's nothing wrong with a bunch of horny teenagers :file: :shifty:

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“Mumbler!” I accused. She stuck her tongue out at me. I smiled.

That reminded me of Charlie and the Chocolate Factory :weird

“Sure, sure. I see the way you two look at each other. Man, you guys crave each other like horny teenagers,” she snickered. I rolled my eyes.

That made me lauugh quite a lot, I loved the update =)

Loverly chapter :D
The purple dress sounds nice, makes me jealous. I want a purple dress. lol
Good chapter, hope to see another one soon!

xx

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“She does. Do you think she likes James? Those two seem to have something going on there,” Jennifer said. I took off my shirt and pants, reaching for the dress.

“I’m not sure if she likes him, but he likes her. There’s no question about it,” Lindsey said. I froze, the dress hanging on one strap. My eyes drifted towards the door of the dressing room. I took the rest of the dress off and put it on as quickly as possible, still in shock. Even if he liked me, I don’t like him. But, he doesn’t like me, so there’s nothing to worry about, I told myself. I took a deep breathe, put on a smile and unlocked the door.

:file: James liked anything that has a fine ass, even he admits it

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“Kate was looking for you earlier. She told me to tell you to meet her at the studio around two,” Mark informed me. I groaned.

“But, I was there from four to nine! I’m not a dancing machine,” I whined.

“Four AM?” Mark asked me. I nodded.

“Wow,” Mark said. “Whatever, I’ll talk to her, okay?” he told me. I smiled gratefully at him.

damn workaholic...either that or she had too much coffee

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“Oh, guys, wait!” I shouted. I picked up the bag and took out the purple dress. I turned around and handed it to Jennifer. She took it from me, speechless.

“You can’t…” she mumbled. I laughed.

“Oh yes, I can. You looked better in it anyway,” I told her, smiling. She laughed and hugged me tightly.

“Your welcome,” I laughed. She pulled away and grinned.

“I’ll pay you back,” she swore. I shrugged.

“You don’t have to. It’s a gift from me, to you,” I told her.

She smiled at me again.

“Thank you!”

that was just sweet <3

So Bitter.:

The only error I thought I saw is that when MSI met up with the two girls, it described Lindsey as being there when, a few paragraphs later, you said she was waiting at the resturaunt.

Fixed it. Thank you.

Haha sweet chapter, and Gerard in the story just adds to the awesomeness. lol
The only error I thought I saw is that when MSI met up with the two girls, it described Lindsey as being there when, a few paragraphs later, you said she was waiting at the resturaunt. That's the only thing I could find wrong, so I thought I would tell you. :D
This is great, keep it up!

xx

Gerard and Italian together in one chapter, oh man, that was a great chapter darling! I loved it ^_^

i love this story!! the original plotline is so funky! cant wait for more!!!

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“Do you always carry pens in your pocket?” I asked him. He shrugged. I quickly wrote down my phone number and ran out of the room.

men tend to do that :file:

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“Hey Jane,” I greeted her.

“Hey, Cyndi,” she smiled.

“How’s Diamond?” I asked.

“Oh, she’s pregnant. And quite moody, for a cat,” she laughed. I laughed as well.

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“What’s up?” I asked.

“I was bored, and you never called,” he whined.

whiny little bitch

great chapter honey!

So Bitter.:

Haha I didn't realize that I wasn't subscribed yet so I was wondering why I didn't get the story update notification email...lol
Great chapter, though Jimmy wasn't too hyper...lol
Can't wait for the next chapter.
This is great, keep it up!

xx

He's not supposed to be hyper. He isn't Jimmy yet, he's James. There's a difference ;).

Haha I didn't realize that I wasn't subscribed yet so I was wondering why I didn't get the story update notification email...lol
Great chapter, though Jimmy wasn't too hyper...lol
Can't wait for the next chapter.
This is great, keep it up!

xx

Jimmy's not crazy enough. He hasn't jumped off of anything or broken any bones yet. :file:

LYN, though. =D

You DO realize this means you have to put Gerard in the story at some point, right? Otherwise you'll spontaneously combust. New rule.