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  • jewellboney

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    Your writing style is the best. This story is unique and I am so hooked on the characters. It is amazing if you will continue to write because you are so talented. I would like to Inform you that NoveIStar is having a competition, you might want to join. https://author.starlight.ink/essay/index.html
    April 13th, 2021 at 06:04am
  • Phantasmagoria

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    That was an amazing story.
    October 6th, 2007 at 08:25am
  • Slap Happy Bullet

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    i LOVE the picture in the background now. i think scruffy billie is the best look he's had-- even better then the red tie and black shirt.

    i forgot how much i loved this story. it was so amazing. i wanted it to last forever.
    August 10th, 2007 at 05:55am
  • sentimental Freak.

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    omg! this is the best story i have ever encountered!
    would you bother writing a sequel?
    April 21st, 2007 at 10:17pm
  • A little's enough.

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    I wish it wasen't over, but I'm very happy on how it ended.

    Dear God. Where Gerard and Billie were talking outside the closet, I thought that Ash and Billie had kissed or something. I probably would've DIED if they had.

    :cheese:
    February 26th, 2007 at 06:17am
  • Slap Happy Bullet

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    ash was very awesome in it. i liked that...

    holy cow though..
    that was one of THE greatest endings to any story.
    dammit.. it's so perfect.
    a sequel would be awesome...
    but i think i like it better like this.
    a sweet ending...
    February 26th, 2007 at 03:11am
  • Bitches.

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    OMG. YAY. IT ALL WORKED OUT! :D

    So... so amazing.

    Sequel would be so awesome! 8) :cheese:
    February 25th, 2007 at 07:41pm
  • Billie Joe Armstrong

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    GAH! That was a thousand times better then i thought it would be with me in it...i didn't think you'd be able to fit me in so well with them...
    Fav line:
    “No way Billie!”
    “Yeah I’d do Chris Cheney, who wouldn’t?”

    Bwah ha ha! i think i pissed myself reading that...almost. yes, i knew something was going on betweenthose two. lol. and you're gonna fix me up with Frankie? *tackles you in hug* have i ever told you how much i love you Becka? well...i do...a whole bunch...tee hee...great end...

    though i NEED more man...damn...
    as i tell ya in my message its still going on in my mind..lol

    Sequel???
    February 24th, 2007 at 11:39pm
  • Static Age

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    OMG! That was so good!! ahhh! i love it! im so sad it's over though!!
    You should write a sequel!!!! plz plz plz plz plz????
    -10 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!-
    February 24th, 2007 at 10:58pm
  • americanidiot013

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    AWWWWWWWWWWWW SO GOOD 100000000000000000000000000000000000000 I LOVE IT A RIDICULOUS AMOUNT
    February 24th, 2007 at 09:37pm
  • Graffiti

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    O_O
    Oh my god... that's so damn sweet. I just wanna run in that room and hug everybody! <3

    My favorite line:
    "Yeah, I'd do Chris Cheney. Who wouldn't?"
    You seriously have no idea how happy that thought makes me...

    Okay, so apart from the obvious I could say about how I do not want this story to end, ever, I gotta say that if it has to, you did it perfectly. Awesome story!
    February 24th, 2007 at 09:26pm
  • peacemaker.

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    Omgilovedit.
    ;_; Don't let it be over.
    February 24th, 2007 at 08:29pm
  • Bitches.

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    ADIEPWNS:tehe:

    and great part :D FUCK OFF GERARD SHE'S BJ'S :cheese:
    February 23rd, 2007 at 06:25pm
  • Billie Joe Armstrong

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    ha ha ha Adie is the fucking shit! or as you Brits say, "quality" i think that was the single funniest part you've written...im in a room with my sis and her boyfriend and they kept giving me looks each time i laughed..lol...i love Adie.."hey jackass" that was great! im in the next part right?
    February 23rd, 2007 at 06:51am
  • E.B.P.M.

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    yeah adie is bipolar haha. great chapter. i bet the next one at the wedding is gonna be even better
    February 23rd, 2007 at 05:53am
  • A little's enough.

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    “Hey jackass.” she spat turning on her heel. Billie flipped her off and stepped over the threshold into the house.

    Favorite.

    :tehe:
    February 23rd, 2007 at 12:37am
  • Graffiti

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    Just a warning... I believe that for a while, my comments will all be along the lines of "God dammit, Gee!"
    Cuz that's how every chapter makes me feel...
    Ha ha, Adie's bipolar. <3
    And Joey and Jake are adorable. I love how they're so cool with Gerard and everything.

    Great part, as always.
    February 23rd, 2007 at 12:17am
  • peacemaker.

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    ^^^ I agree. She better not cheat on Billie with Gerard. :cheese:
    February 22nd, 2007 at 11:35pm
  • A little's enough.

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    I really think that they should just bring Jake and Joe.
    Seriously.
    Then everyone wins.
    And she BETTER not cheat on Billie.
    Especially with Gerard.

    :cheese:
    February 20th, 2007 at 05:47am
  • Slap Happy Bullet

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    awwe...
    poor jake...
    little jake and joey..
    i swear if billie doesn't make an effort to see them... i might slap him senseless
    February 19th, 2007 at 11:33pm