Shine a Light - Comments

Your writing style is the best. This story is unique and I am so hooked on the characters. It is amazing if you will continue to write because you are so talented. I would like to Inform you that NoveIStar is having a competition, you might want to join. https://author.starlight.ink/essay/index.html

That was an amazing story.

i LOVE the picture in the background now. i think scruffy billie is the best look he's had-- even better then the red tie and black shirt.

i forgot how much i loved this story. it was so amazing. i wanted it to last forever.

omg! this is the best story i have ever encountered!
would you bother writing a sequel?

I wish it wasen't over, but I'm very happy on how it ended.

Dear God. Where Gerard and Billie were talking outside the closet, I thought that Ash and Billie had kissed or something. I probably would've DIED if they had.

:cheese:

ash was very awesome in it. i liked that...

holy cow though..
that was one of THE greatest endings to any story.
dammit.. it's so perfect.
a sequel would be awesome...
but i think i like it better like this.
a sweet ending...

:tehe:

OMG. YAY. IT ALL WORKED OUT! :D

So... so amazing.

Sequel would be so awesome! 8) :cheese:

GAH! That was a thousand times better then i thought it would be with me in it...i didn't think you'd be able to fit me in so well with them...
Fav line:
“No way Billie!”
“Yeah I’d do Chris Cheney, who wouldn’t?”

Bwah ha ha! i think i pissed myself reading that...almost. yes, i knew something was going on betweenthose two. lol. and you're gonna fix me up with Frankie? *tackles you in hug* have i ever told you how much i love you Becka? well...i do...a whole bunch...tee hee...great end...

though i NEED more man...damn...
as i tell ya in my message its still going on in my mind..lol

Sequel???

OMG! That was so good!! ahhh! i love it! im so sad it's over though!!
You should write a sequel!!!! plz plz plz plz plz????
-10 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!-

AWWWWWWWWWWWW SO GOOD 100000000000000000000000000000000000000 I LOVE IT A RIDICULOUS AMOUNT

O_O
Oh my god... that's so damn sweet. I just wanna run in that room and hug everybody! <3

My favorite line:
"Yeah, I'd do Chris Cheney. Who wouldn't?"
You seriously have no idea how happy that thought makes me...

Okay, so apart from the obvious I could say about how I do not want this story to end, ever, I gotta say that if it has to, you did it perfectly. Awesome story!

Omgilovedit.
;_; Don't let it be over.

ADIEPWNS:tehe:

and great part :D FUCK OFF GERARD SHE'S BJ'S :cheese:

ha ha ha Adie is the fucking shit! or as you Brits say, "quality" i think that was the single funniest part you've written...im in a room with my sis and her boyfriend and they kept giving me looks each time i laughed..lol...i love Adie.."hey jackass" that was great! im in the next part right?

yeah adie is bipolar haha. great chapter. i bet the next one at the wedding is gonna be even better

“Hey jackass.” she spat turning on her heel. Billie flipped her off and stepped over the threshold into the house.

Favorite.

:tehe:

Just a warning... I believe that for a while, my comments will all be along the lines of "God dammit, Gee!"
Cuz that's how every chapter makes me feel...
Ha ha, Adie's bipolar. <3
And Joey and Jake are adorable. I love how they're so cool with Gerard and everything.

Great part, as always.

^^^ I agree. She better not cheat on Billie with Gerard. :cheese:

I really think that they should just bring Jake and Joe.
Seriously.
Then everyone wins.
And she BETTER not cheat on Billie.
Especially with Gerard.

:cheese:

awwe...
poor jake...
little jake and joey..
i swear if billie doesn't make an effort to see them... i might slap him senseless