I really like the story (all your stories) haven't read it all yet because i would like to tell you that your swedish isn't so good, and i had to do it before i forgot it :P
You hade two sentences in chapter 12 in swedish, it was "Jag känna dum" (I feel stupid) "Du er skarp." (You’re cute) Jag känna dum, sounds like a caveman said it, would be much better "Jag känner mig dum" "Du er skarp" only swedish word there is "du" my mind thought it said "du är skärp" (you're belt) :P correct translation is "du är söt"
Aaaand finnish doesn't sound like swedish at all! it's really different I can't understand it at all and im swedish xD
naw, cute <3 lol, Bam is so slow! I know exactly how you feel bout the writing! I'm having the same prob but I'm still gonna read your stuff, you're an awesome writer <3
EWWIE!!! PCD!!! *vomits* YAY VILLE MIGHT GET A SURPRISED VISIT!!! Umm, shit, wasnt the smartest idea ever... wonder what Bam will do as revenge. Lol at naive Ryan
You hade two sentences in chapter 12 in swedish, it was
"Jag känna dum" (I feel stupid)
"Du er skarp." (You’re cute)
Jag känna dum, sounds like a caveman said it, would be much better "Jag känner mig dum"
"Du er skarp" only swedish word there is "du" my mind thought it said "du är skärp" (you're belt) :P correct translation is "du är söt"
Aaaand finnish doesn't sound like swedish at all! it's really different I can't understand it at all and im swedish xD