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  • TheWistler

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    I really like the story (all your stories) haven't read it all yet because i would like to tell you that your swedish isn't so good, and i had to do it before i forgot it :P

    You hade two sentences in chapter 12 in swedish, it was
    "Jag känna dum" (I feel stupid)
    "Du er skarp." (You’re cute)
    Jag känna dum, sounds like a caveman said it, would be much better "Jag känner mig dum"
    "Du er skarp" only swedish word there is "du" my mind thought it said "du är skärp" (you're belt) :P correct translation is "du är söt"

    Aaaand finnish doesn't sound like swedish at all! it's really different I can't understand it at all and im swedish xD
    October 21st, 2010 at 10:45pm
  • AlternativeAdele

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    Naw, that's cute!! hope they re-do the getting married thing whilst sober! :)
    Cant wait for more *huggles you*
    Merry Christmas!! <3
    December 21st, 2009 at 10:25am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    awe...!
    December 19th, 2009 at 01:14am
  • FrostedXpink

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    Love it! Very hot, update soon? :)
    December 12th, 2009 at 11:38pm
  • foREVer an Angel

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    I loved it. update soon :D
    June 21st, 2009 at 09:57pm
  • AlternativeAdele

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    Aw, I luffers it, more soon???
    June 3rd, 2009 at 10:22am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    I loved it, it was really cute. though a bit pg-13 with the shower thing. why couldn't it be more detailed? but any smut is good smut
    June 2nd, 2009 at 06:35am
  • AlternativeAdele

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    naw, cute <3
    lol, Bam is so slow!
    I know exactly how you feel bout the writing! I'm having the same prob but I'm still gonna read your stuff, you're an awesome writer <3
    May 10th, 2009 at 01:57pm
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    I liked it
    May 5th, 2009 at 01:14am
  • VengeanceXChickX

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    Lol I love them together <333
    March 21st, 2009 at 08:27pm
  • NeverXUnderstoodXIt

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    i really enjoy this story. it makes me happy. i hope you find more time to work on it.
    March 17th, 2009 at 05:26am
  • AlternativeAdele

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    Naw, so cute... poor ville... more soon??
    I know what its like, I havent updated my stories in FOREVER coz I'm doing too much homework!
    ISLY! <3
    March 4th, 2009 at 05:49am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    I liked it
    March 4th, 2009 at 03:10am
  • VengeanceXChickX

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    Aww she's visiting Ville!!!!
    February 27th, 2009 at 01:47am
  • AlternativeAdele

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    Naw, they are so adorable, more soon?
    February 4th, 2009 at 01:42pm
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    I loved it!!
    February 4th, 2009 at 06:25am
  • AlternativeAdele

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    Zomg! Update yay! Me wonders what happened to Ryan, more soon?
    February 2nd, 2009 at 12:43pm
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    nein, you DON'T suck. This was pretty good!!
    February 1st, 2009 at 07:37am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    they miss each other so
    January 5th, 2009 at 12:08am
  • AlternativeAdele

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    EWWIE!!! PCD!!! *vomits*
    YAY VILLE MIGHT GET A SURPRISED VISIT!!!
    Umm, shit, wasnt the smartest idea ever... wonder what Bam will do as revenge.
    Lol at naive Ryan
    January 4th, 2009 at 02:49pm
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