The Interview - Comments

Holy fuck like ////damn//// this is extremely well written and the concept just..it hit me somewhere. One of my favorites by far.

Amazing, I feel like crying because of how real it truly is. How easily that could've happened. I mean, they're both married to girls now. But that COULD HAVE happened. It's such a great story.

Damn, that was good.
=]
I really liked it.
It was besutiful.

This is so amazing . .to find this and make me cry. . .It was so sad to had that reminder but still you had to listen to it to keep you alive.
You write this character as if they were really frank and gerard but you know its not. .for awhile you make me believe it was really happening. .You really had an awesome one shot here. .I'm at lost to say because i'm still at the moment. I love the ending note. .
Meet me somewhere in time love. physically ,mentally ,spiritually. .
That was classic. . sniff. .

That was amazing.

I have neither the time not the energy nor the words to tell you how amazing that was.

You are so wise beyond your years, it's pure insanity. You teach me things, even in daily conversation, especially in your writing. This tugs the heartstrings in all the right places and I wish to God this was true.

God. God. God. God.

You know. It is true. Even if it isn't real necessarily...it's true. There is so much truth behind your words, it stuns me. And the things you say about life, the thoughts about love, the observations of our nature. It's so ridiculously beautiful.

God.

I had to read the ending to this over and over a few times to fully understand it, but once I did it all made sense to me.

There's something about everything you write that makes everything seem like it's not a story. There are just little details that make your chracters seem less like people in a story. Like they are really real people. Even though Frank and Gerard are real people. I guess I'ms yaing the way they are in the story makes them not Frank and Gerard from Mcr, but Frank and Gerard in this story. It's like they are two separate people that came from your head. They're separate from the actual Frank and Gerard. I'm not sure if that makes any sense... either way, you're talented.

In a way, I was glad that Frank killed himself. That sounds really messed up but it's the truth. I really don't think their relationship would've worked out if things had happened differently. I think they wou;d've grown apart and moved on... even though they both wanted it to work.. it probably wouldn't have. So.. whenever they meet again it will be under different circumstances and it might work out differently. I'm not really sure what I'm talking about.. this is kind of like word vomit pouring onto the screen... haha.

Anyways... this was a really good story. I'm not sure if this comment is even on topic all the way. If it wasn't...I loved this a lot. It was beautiful. If this comment was on topic... I still feel the same way.

:') that was trully amazing.
it made me almost cry
(just didn't cause I'm in my annoying little brother's room and he adores making fun of me when I cry reading stories)
it was absolutely amazing.

You are simply amazing.
...This was actually one of the best one-shots i've read. . It made me cry.

You have an extreme amount of talent.

BRILLIANT! ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT!
I don't read too many one-shots, but for some reason I decided to read yours.
I'm totally glad I read it. It started off kind of sad, but it was hopeful in the end.
Keep up the great work! :D

This story was honestly one of the best one shots I have ever read. The tension and awkwardness is convyded incredibly well. It was raw, original, and very...beleivable. It all seemed very real, and that was scary and upsetting, and that's how a good story should be.

Oh my life.
That was ... amazing. I can't do it justice with this comment, but it really was one of the best things i've read in ages.
It was so sad but had some element of happiness behind it in those last lines, well thats the impression i got anyway.
The part with Frank 'in the car' was very haunting, probably because to Gerard it seemed so real.
Just...wow.
You are a phenominal writer.

x

Hmmm. Now that I’ve finally read it. D:

Anything. Everything. Just because that was what Frank did. Like Gerard always drank rum, no Coke; like Mikey always put jelly on one side of his toast and peanut butter on the other.

I like the strange details. It’s things like these that make a story more... real. Weird things. And your stories always have a real touch to them. Which I like. Because the reader can relate more, and stuff.

That date is six days in the past already, but only four days since the one where Frank’s heartbeat went out. Mailed it out himself and then drove his car off the curve in the highway.

I inhaled sharply, and then had to reread the lines again. I guess this was the turn, or at least the detail that changes the mood. I certainly got chills.

By the way, the use of a cassette tape in my mind is kind of adorable. I don’t know why. I think I could actually imagine Frank using one still, in the world of CD’s and mp3’s.

“So you’re saying that My Chemical Romance didn’t break up because Gerard cheated on you?”

Oh. I felt awkward just reading that, so I guess I could imagine what Frank was thinking, Gerard too.

Inside the space of his head, Gerard imagines Frank beside him.

Wow. Here I just started feeling really bad for Gerard. How he talked to himself, it’s just... I can’t even find the words. I just feel really bad.

The last lines were just... perfect. I don’t even have the words to describe them, they were the perfect end. I got shivers and tears in my eyes.

Anyways, I think this comment is really, really crappy. And I can’t say anything else except for repeat whatever I’ve told you last... all the detail made this scary-real, sad-real, everything-real. It just seemed so real, and... gah, this is so unprofessional. Anyways, another story by you that made me cry. In a good way. Yeah. :shifty