I know this is stupid, and its been ages since you probley recived a comment on this story. But the ending made me cry at the sheer emotion gone into it.
i was going through your old stories- trying to grasp which plots went where and so on-- and then i came here and i remembered loving it so dearly. for some reason this particular one is very special to me, as well as shine a light.
they both have a sense of magic. i mean, all your stories do, but this is different. it makes me want to fall in love. and well... in that sense i have- with writing. i think those were what motivated me so much to just flat out write stories.. whether it had anything to do with love or want.
so i just thought i'd let you know that this one has a special place in my heart.
I've just read the first chapter and it's great really original. I have like the exact same plot on my computer for one of my stories tho ha ha except with different people. Great minds think alike!
SO I just finished this story...the whole story has been fucking...amazing. I'm about to read the sequel, but figured I'd comment this first. I can't believe you don't have like...254 comments on this. It's fab!