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  • charming.

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    Wow. That was vivid, lol. Very vivid.
    It's a bit jarring, though, when you skip between formal language and more casual language.
    But otherwise, this is great.
    Subscribed, looking forward to an update.
    May 18th, 2007 at 08:39pm
  • Jade Taylor

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    wait im confused. where was she going and what or who smaked him. i dont understand the last paragraph
    May 18th, 2007 at 05:22pm
  • Jade Taylor

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    i like i like i like VAMPIRES ARE THE SHIT!!!! this story fucking rocks!!!
    May 7th, 2007 at 04:39am
  • Halii

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    It's freaking GORGEOUS.
    May 4th, 2007 at 07:38am
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