Resolve - Comments

I loved it, your stories always seem to amaze me.

I think it's wonderful, just like everything else you write.

this is great. there are a few typos but the story itself is really good.

I loved it!

This is good so far. More soon? =]

"Your kidding right?"

Just something - You're kidding, not your kidding.
That's like saying the kidding belongs to you. Not you are kidding.

It was a relatively small house, three bedroom one bathroom.

I think here it'd be better if you said 'it was a relatively small house, with three bedrooms, and one bathroom' otherwise it sounds like you're abbreviating it for a travel agent handbook.

Child protective services

I think it's child protection services. Not sure, but I think it is.

"You know I thought you were better then them. But your not, you rather just get rid of me too."

Again, a case of the 'you are' instead of your.

It was a relatively small room.
This mistake doesn't matter much, but when I was reading I noticed that it repeats the phrase of it being 'relatively small' like when you described the house.

"I'm sorry hun. We just can't help you anymore."

You should write 'hon' instead of 'hun' it sounds as if she's about to name him Attila or something.
I mean, would you write 'hunny'? No, so just checking that.
And again, here, "Please don't be mad at us hun, it's for your own good."

"Your all packed then?"
Again, the you are, you're, and not your.

He was sure Evette or Steve would be try to feed him that nonsense about how this was for his own good and everything but they didn't try to.

Read that again, yes, do, now is it, would be trying to feed him nonsense, or would try to feed him nonsense, decide, because this sentence doesn't work the way it is.

But then again, everything things he'd done had been to help somebody else.
Here, you might want to take out the 'everything' and put in an 'all'.

"I'll miss you hun, I'm sorry."

Again, the hun/hon situation.

"No, I'm sorry. You probably don't have to many other options."

Here, just add another 'o' to the word 'to' and the sentence will be perfect.

Josh nodded and pocked the money before turning back around and walking to the bus.
Here, it's just 'pocketed' not 'pocked'.

There wasn't too many people on the bus, many ten or fifteen.
I think you meant to write 'about ten or fifteen'.

because the driver said they were going to begin leaving.

Somehow that doesn't fit right, you could put 'the driver said they were about to leave', which would fit in better.

s the bus reached the end of the stations parking lot a began turning onto the road Josh watched as the couple waved one more time before turning and walking back towards their car.

Merely, 'stations' is supposed to be 'station's' as in belonging to the station. Not plural but singular.

Josh signed and reached into his travel bag.

I think that was supposed to be 'sighed' was it?

Anyway, that's all the constructive criticism I can give.
But I think this is an extremely good story, can't wait for more, and you have an amazing sense of description and an uncanny writing ability.

I loved it.