Don't Scream If You Love Me - Comments

She had better not leave that baby behind. That's all I'm going to say.

There's more, but that's my first reaction.

omg nooooo
she can't leave the baby just because of their lies.
stop being stubborn for 2 seconds and think about why they did it.
can't wait for the next one
this story has been amazing.

great chapter, but I'm super mad she's acting that way!
I understand they lied to her and everything but she has to understand why they did it and not be so damn stubborn for 5 minutes!
cant wait to see what she's planning

Matt's back!!!!! I knew you had something up your sleeve, sister dear!! And that you wouldn't let the biggest Matt lover you know in tears here on this side of the fine planet. I believe I love you more than I already did. Personally, I think Matt should've ripped off Brian's balls when he had the chance, but that's just me. Brian could've easily become a eunuch if it had been me (keep in mind that this is if I'm a guy) if I had found him like that over my pregnant girlfriend. Seriously. I've wanted to do Brian bodily harm before in this story and your other one but never have I wanted to like in this chapter.

Anyway, great update, Momma and I'm really sad as the next update is the last. :cry:

Holy Shit.
I can't believe he's actually alive.
That sends a total twist to the story.
I love it though.
Update soon please

le gasp! He's aliiiiive!

Syn tried to rape her. o_O Oh hell has broken loose .. for the bazillionth time.

LOVED IT! XD

More soon? You = genius writer. :D

... SYN WHYYY? D:

"... or die regretting the time you lost, it's empty and cold without you here..." - Seize the Day

I was listening to that whilst reading this. *tears*

Amazing update! :]

Oh, THANK GOD! I cried and cried when Matt died 'cause I really thought that it wasn't going to happen and that it was all some kind of plan on his part. Then I thought that maybe he's dead after all.. And now he's not! Yay! This story made me a total Matt-fan.

I still like Syn in this though. He's not a very likeable character and I don't get why I like him, but I do.

Ha! I knew it! :XD

I hope that when Brian is arrested some one ass rapes him in the prison. Muahahaha! :XD

dude i totally didnt see that shit coming!!!
loved it!!
cant wait for more!!!

First, congratulations :)

Second, holy shit. Honestly didnt expect that.

Okay I don't know if I've commented before but I know I started reading this story a while ago and stupidly forgot to subscribe. So now that I've found it again, I finished reading until the last update. I have to say, it is absolutely amazing! I love it so much! It's addicting and just when you think something is going to go smoothly it goes the other way taking an unexpected turn.

Although I was hoping she would choose Matt in the end (just because he's my favorite) I didn't expect for him to start treating her nicely or anything. I had a feeling that Brian was going to kill Matt and I knew Matt knew about it, but when you made a detailed comment about the blood coming out of his wounds, I honestly thought you killed him off and right before they had their baby too! Anyways you can probably tell that I was more than happy that he showed up when he did! Ana's reaction was completely expected, telling him not to touch her, but I also understand him trying to protect her in the long run. Now I hope she can have her baby without anything happening. I almost smiled if not for the situation Ana was in when Syn ran out of the room scared shitless. I can only imagine his pale and ready-to-vomit expression! I'm evil but what can I do about it? XD Other than that he's an absolute ass, such a sadist, he deserves to be caught with his little Finnish babe and be put to life after putting them through all those things.

Also a little question, isn't 39 weeks almost 10 months? Isn't that a little too long overdue for a baby? I mean that has to be one well nourished baby! XD

What can I say though? Johnny has to be my absolute favorite in this story. His character is amazing. The way you developed him is very captivating and innovative! I love that he's observent and intelligent and on top of it all he's good-natured. A well rounded guy. Gets me all hot and bothered just thinking about his short ass! XD Joking, but yeah, he's awesome!

Another thing. From what I understood you have a little girl now, well if I got it right then congratulations! I bet she'll be one hell of a writer one day, just like you're now!

omg matt's alive!!!

I hope they can get past this.

congratulations on the new addition :D

yay, so glad Matt's back!!
dont hate Brian as much now...but it's still there lol
I hope the baby is okay, cant wait to see what happens!

Gnahhhhhhhhhhh
He's back?!
Thats just made things even more confusing to my silly little mind.
So basically thye faked his death so they could get rid of him?
Good, I like it.
Although she needs to be alright, her and the baby, and Matt, and then they live and be alright again and have a little family to make things better.

Ooooo and congrats on the rugrat :) hope everythings ok and they aren't keeping you up all night. How bad was the labour?? My mums a midwife so i know many stories and stuff about it all.
xx

karma's a bitch aint it?

hope everything is alright with ana and the baby though. she'd worked so hard to be happy with matt!!!

congratulations on the new addition!!!

Just read all of this...amazing
pretty much hate Brian now...

GOODLUCK!! :arms:
I hope everything goes to plan for you.

Oh My goodness! Good luck with your new born! I bet she'll be so cute!

Well, I hope all goes well and you have an easy labor!!!! Congratulations!! We can wait, your little girl is more important.