Hmm...dirty or not? Dude, I'm not sure about this one. Maybe some action, but like don't rush into the dirtyness. It's cool and all, but the story's doing awesome anyway =] Dunno, that's my opinion. xxx
well ill be waiting. mean while its good! look at all ur commentors and stars and such! <3 im kinda jealous i want great success with my stories too!!!
Ah, I'm jealous >.< I'd die to listen to an acoustic The Used song live AND get to listen to songs before they were even released. Lucky lucky Lina xP =D xxx
Awesome update Lina :D Yea mibba is mean, i was going to update my one-shot the other day but it didnt work, and i tried today, but nope :( so im gonna try tomorrow or some other day!