The Joneses - Comments

  • Hello everyone.

    Again, I want to tell everyone about my new story, "The Joneses".
    I'm really excited about it, because already it's started off a thousand times better than "What The Devil Doesn't Know". It's essentially the same story, but told in a more realistic way. With better grammar and spelling. (Hopefully.)

    So read up, and leave comments. Constructive criticism is always a great thing, since I don't want the mibba police up my ass.
    :)

    Have a wonderful day everyone!
    September 22nd, 2008 at 05:24am